Haal - e - Dil

by Sukhanwar on April 02, 2005, 07:07:28 AM
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Phir Utha Kalam,
Phir likhi nazam,
Phir Kisike Haal-e-Dil par Wah Wah Hogi...

Hey friends! I am totally new in here, So any kind of comments, criticism, suggestions or just about anything are nore than welcome.  Usual Smile
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dhadkan
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2005, 07:09:35 AM »
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Wah wah Sukhanwar.... keep it up
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Sukhanwar
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2005, 07:22:52 AM »
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Thanks Dhadkan Usual Smile

Yeh shayari bhi toh unhi ki den hai,
Warna hum likhtey to bhi kya likhtey...
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2005, 08:43:53 AM »
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arre wah Sukhanwar ji!!!! acha likha aapne! keep it up!

and welcome to yoindia!!!!!!!

yaad to unhe sham subha karte hai,
shayari pe unhe bewafa kehe kar yeh guna karte hai,
ansowon se sajaya hai har lafz ko maine,
aur log yaha pad kar "wah wah" karte hai!!

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dhadkan
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2005, 09:00:07 AM »
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Kya khoob hai meena..... :lol: very gud
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Sukhanwar
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2005, 10:54:23 AM »
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Wah Wah Meena Ji. And thanks for the welcome.
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Sukhanwar
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2005, 11:13:23 AM »
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Shayari hai yeh meri, meri shikaayat bhi,
izhaar-e Gham-e-rusvaaii samajh isey ya amal-e-naalaan samajh.
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2005, 11:25:26 AM »
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thanx dhadkan and suhkanwar ji!!!

 :D

apka last sher samajh me nahin aya  sad5
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Sukhanwar
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2005, 11:37:21 AM »
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izhaar-e Gham-e-rusvaaii samajh isey ya amal-e-naalaan samajh.

izhaar-e gham-e-rusvaii = expressing the sorrow of disappointment
amal-e-naalaan = act of complaining

take it as a way by which i am sharing my feelings or take it as a complaint against you.  Usual Smile

Hope you figure it out.
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2005, 11:46:36 AM »
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oh wowwwwwwwwww thanx for the explainations!

 :D
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