Halaat Ke Darr Se Rukhne Walo Ko Maine Kabhi Phir Sambhalte Hue Nahi Dekha...

by khwaish on August 20, 2009, 04:35:03 PM
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Yeh Nazm Ek Aise Dost Ke Liye Likhi gayi Hai,Jisse Meri Mulakat Kuch hi Din Pehle Hui hai..Kabhi-Kabhi Hum Sochte Hai Ke Sirf Hum Hi Hai Jo Pareshaan Hai Yaa Kuch Bure Haalat Aur Majbooriyon Ke shikaar Hai..Par Jab Hum kisi Aur Ko Har Mushkil Ka Saamna Dat Kar Karte Hue Dekhte Hai To shukar Karte hai Uss Khuda Ka Ke Uss Shaks Ki Jageh Par Hum Nahi..Kuch Aise Hi Jazbaat Ko Zehan Mein Rakh Kar Likh Raha Hoon..Umeed Karta Hoon Ke Aap Sab ke Dil Ko Chuu Sakoon..Shukriya...


Jo Bichad Jaaye Ek Baar,Unhe Phir Milte Nahi Dekha..
Zakhm To Khaaye Bahut Par Zakhmo Ko Kabhi Silte Nahi Dekha...

Dekha Hai Maine Bhi Badalte Hue Mausam Ko!!
Par Jo Phool Giir Jaaye Ek Baar Apni Daali Se,
Unhe phir Kabhi Khilte Nahi Dekha...

Maine Dekha Hai Aaj Ek Aise Shaks Ko Jo Har Haal Mein Muskurata Hai!!
Aandhiyon Ke Darr Se Usse Kabhi Hilte Nahi Dekha..

Jo Kuch Bhi Tere Saath Hua Hai Woh Teri Taqdeer Mein Likha Tha!!!
Maine Kisi Insaan Ko Apne Haathon se, Apni Hi Taqdeer Ko likhte Nahi Dekha..

Asaan Hai Mera Sirf Yeh Keh Dena Ke, "Tu Himmat Naa Haar!"
Sach To Yeh Hai Ke Tere Jageh Par Maine Kabhi Khud Ko Rakh Kar Nahi Dekha..

Kuch Rishte Aaene Ki Tarah Hote Hai Jo Toot Jaaye To Daraar Aana Laazmi Hai!!
Toothe Hue sheehse Ko Maine Kabhi Phir Juudte Nahi Dekha..

Jo Kisi Raah Par Tere Ladkada Jaaye Yeh kadam To "Tu Rukh Mat!"
Halaat Ke Darr Se Rukhne Walo Ko Maine Kabhi Phir sambhalte Nahi Dekha..


"Khwaish" Yeh Jaanta Bhi Hai Aur Yeh Maanta Bhi Hai,
Ke Suuni Jaati Hai Har Fariyad Uske Darbaar mein!!!
Woh Khuda Sirf Deta Hai Sab Kuch!!!!!
Maine Usse Kissi Se Kabhi Kuch Cheente Hue Nahi Dekha...

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2009, 04:37:23 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai, ek eke line... uff kamaal@dhamal.superbbb!!!   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2009, 04:38:28 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Bohot Khoob...Humesha ki tarah sachai ko aapne alfaaz main baandh diya...jitni taareef karen kam hogi....Bohot Khoob Dost !!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2009, 04:40:23 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne khwahish ji Applause

Sirf ek baat kahunga aap se, na jaane kahaan suni thi

"If its not a happy ending then its not the ending"
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2009, 06:23:46 PM »
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kya kahe Khwaish ji.....har alfaaz sachai ko darsha rha hai.....na jaane kyu aankhe nam ho rahi hai.....
phr bhi baar-baar parrne ka dil kar rha hai......kya kahu....
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khuda aapke dost ko himmat bakhshe....

Khuch likhe bina yha se jaane ka man nahi kiya isliye khuch likhne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hu.....


Bichde hai aaj to jarur koi vajah hogi
Waqt k maaron ki bhi koi to dawaa hogi

Taqdeer mein likhe dukh ko sehna hai,seh lenge
Hamein iss raah laane walo ki bhi to koi saja hogi

Zakhmo ka kya hai dost...aaj taaze hai,kal bhar jaayenge
Baaki rahege jo nishaan,wo bhi mit jaayenge ek din
Jab khuda ki rehmat se khushiya chaaron aur hogi

Dua hai rab se, meri jagah tu kabhi aaye bhi na
Zindagi yu jeene se badi kya koi saja hogi

Prem ki dor se bandhe rishte tutte nahi kabhi
Jo tutte un rishto me yakeenan kahi kami hogi

Uske karm se hi jee rahe hai hum apni zindagi
Aitbaar hai uss khuda par,
Meri har ardaas uske darbaar me kabul hogi

Aaj gum diye hai kal khushiya bhi wo hi dega
Achhai ki aaj bhi burai par jeet hogi...

Teri har baat yaad rakhenge "Khwaish"
Halaaton se darr kar rukne waalon mein,
kabhi hamaari maujudagi na hogi.....
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2009, 07:50:55 PM »
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Equally nice reply Pooja bohot bohot khoob dear  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2009, 08:04:05 PM »
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wah wah bahoot khoob Nikhaar!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 20, 2009, 11:02:59 PM »
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Wah wah Khwaish ji and Nikhaar ji,bahut khoob,really touching,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2009, 03:05:46 AM »
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Bahut bahut achha likha hia aapne Khwaish Ji...

sahi hia kabhi kabhi hum sochte hia ke hamein hi sab dukh hia and ask questions to God that "WHY ME". But sometimes if we sit silently and think, then we realise that its not we alone who are facing the problems. there are people who have much problems in life but they dont complain. Infact there is no sense in complaining too..

Really a wonderful poem once again from your side:clapping:
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2009, 03:31:29 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish bhaiya..Wonderful touching lines...  Clapping Smiley and nice reply Nikhaar dear  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2009, 02:42:13 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI    KHWAISH JI.......

JO JEENE KI KABHI CHAHA NA CHODHE,
GIRTE-GIRTE BHI SAMBHALTEY USKO DEKHA HAI.

JO HAR HAL MAIN MUSKARAKAR JEEYE,
GAMON KO-DAR KINAR KARTE USKO DEKHA HAI.

YEH SACH HAI EK BAR JO RISHTA TOOT JAAYE,TOH FIR JUD TA NAHIN,
LAKIN RISHTON KO BHI TOOTNE PAR PASHTATEY HUYE, HAMNE DEKHA HAI.

YEH SACH HAI KI INSAAN APNI TAQDEER NAHIN LIKH SAKHTA,
AGAR IRAADA HAI,TOH INSAAN AASMAN BHI CHU SAKHTA HAI.

JIS INSAAN KO DOOSRON KE GUM,KHUD KE GUMON SEY JAADA DIKHTA HAI,
KHUDA KA  SHUKAR GUJAAR KARTA HAI,APNI ZINDAGI HAS KE JEETA HAI.

RAAZ HAI ZINDAGI KE, JO JAANEY WOH JEEYE,
YUN TOH HAR INSAAN MAR-MAR KE JEETA HAI.





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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2009, 02:48:04 PM »
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Waah Waah bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai Khwaish ji.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 21, 2009, 04:14:38 PM »
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nice work cara ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 21, 2009, 04:28:18 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai, ek eke line... uff kamaal@dhamal.superbbb!!!   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Dear!!!
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Aapka Reply Sabse Pehle Dekh kar,Bahut Khushi Hui..Aap Bhi Kuch Likhte To Chaar Chaand Lag jaate..

Thanks A Lot Pooja.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: August 21, 2009, 05:31:46 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Bohot Khoob...Humesha ki tarah sachai ko aapne alfaaz main baandh diya...jitni taareef karen kam hogi....Bohot Khoob Dost !!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much Talat Dost!!!!

Aapne Bhi Humesha Ki tarah Ab Bhi Mera Hausla Badhaya Hai Ke main Kuch likh Sakoon..

Thankyou Soo Much Talat For Always Appreciating!!

            Thankyou !
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