Imtehaan Ke Pal "Khwaish" -Panna 2:Shairi - E

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«Reply #15 on: October 24, 2011, 02:39:50 PM »

Wah Wah Wah..
Dost jaisa feel kar raha tha bilkul waisa hi parrne ko
mila hai aj mujhe..
Kya baat hai..
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Lavz nahin hai tariff kay!
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: Imtehaan Ke Pal "Khwaish"

«Reply #16 on: October 29, 2011, 10:55:32 AM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 20, 2011, 03:41:13 PM

khwaish ji as usual fantastic poetry.
one thing I feel in you that u r improving day by day.
that is must to go deep in feelings.

Thanks a Million Sureshji..

Thanks a Ton For Those Kind Words


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Re: Imtehaan Ke Pal "Khwaish"

«Reply #17 on: November 01, 2011, 06:56:16 AM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on October 20, 2011, 05:28:35 PM

Zindagi ko ek naye nazariye se dekhna sikhati hai ye kavita...gehri baatein..jo dil ko chuu jaaye...superb....

Jab bhi likha zindagi k liye likha
Khuch naye palon ko jeene k liye likha
kabhi apne liye likha, kabhi dusron k liye likha
Aapki kalam ko har likhne waale ka sallaam... notworthy

Taarif mein kalam ki jab likhne baithe toh yahi likha.... Clapping Smiley

Thanks A Lotttttt Dear Pooja..

Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete Rahiyega


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Re: Imtehaan Ke Pal "Khwaish"

«Reply #18 on: November 09, 2011, 11:59:28 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 20, 2011, 06:21:04 PM

Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Kafi achche khayaal kahe hai janab...
Sabhi khayaal kafi achche aur gehre rahe...
Humari daad hazir hai...

Par hume laga ke aapki is kalaam meiN pur zor
lafzoN ki behad kami hai.. Jisse radiff aur kafiye
apna maqaam banaaye raha khayaaloN ko saath deta
nazar nahi aaya.. Waise achchi koshish rahi..
Aapke khayaal humesha hi khub rahte hai so woH kami
koi mayne nahi rakhti..

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...

Parwaaz Ji Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya

Ho Sakta Hai Ke shayad Main Mere Khayalon Ke saath Insaaf Naa Kar Paya..Khair Aage Zaroor Dhyaan Dunga..Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete rahiyega


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