Jaam

by Sonu on September 20, 2005, 02:57:15 AM
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Tum jaam toontnay ka bahana na karo,
Hum teyri ahkhon say pee lengey,
Tum na aao, bus anay ka wada karo,
Hum intezaar main jee lengey,  Shocked  Puzzled !  :oops:
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2005, 07:13:07 PM »
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wah bahut badiya hai

hum intezar mein jee lenge
iss bahane apki yaad me kho lenge
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2005, 03:06:49 AM »
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shukriya salma ji Usual Smile

yaddo mey ab khoo ker jeney ka kiya phayda,
intjar mey teyrey her pal tadepney ka keya phayda,
mooth key agosh mey hum ja chukey hai,
to ab roney ka keya phayeda,
door to tumsey hu hee chukey hai to pachtaney ka keya paheyda.
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2005, 03:24:04 PM »
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wowwwwwww sonu and salma...

tere ek wade pe hum zindagi jee lenge,
teri kushi ke liye har gum pee lenge,
ho na jaye tu kahi ruswa is jahan me,
maut ko apna kar hum apne hoonth see lenge!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2005, 04:48:23 PM »
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kya khoob likhtey ho salma sonu our meena ji....tumhaari is shayari ne meri kalam ko hi awaaz de daali.....

tumhaare honthh see lene se her raah hi sooni ho jaayegi
mehfil mein her saaz ki tarannumaayee khooni ho jaayegi
gam na pee lena ye waasta hai tumeh apne zigre yaar ka
nahi toh is jahaan mein yakeenan dosti se wafa uthh jayegi
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2005, 06:24:32 PM »
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thanks sonu ji n meenu sis n harsha jee
har ek ne badiya likha hai
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2005, 04:42:03 PM »
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shukriya salma sis!  :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2005, 02:16:13 AM »
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shukriya menu, salama and harash ji

teyri rusvayee key nam sey hum dartey hai,
apni hee parchayee sey na janey keo ghabratey hai,
maut ki agosh mey jaker hum apney hooth to see hee chukey hai,
tanhayeo sey nata esa juda key sab dost chut gaye,
beybasi key badel etney cahey key sab patey bikhar gaye.
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2005, 07:17:52 AM »
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Quote from: "Sonu"
Tum jaam toontnay ka bahana na karo,
Hum teyri ahkhon say pee lengey,
Tum na aao, bus anay ka wada karo,
Hum intezaar main jee lengey,  Shocked  Puzzled !  :oops:


Great work sonu.naya_shayar gives u standing applause
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2005, 03:05:37 PM »
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thanks naya_shayar

welcome to yoindia Usual Smile
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2005, 06:00:37 PM »
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very  nice  Sonu........Salma.........Meena...............
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2005, 11:39:42 PM »
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thx waheed
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #12 on: November 09, 2005, 05:51:11 PM »
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ue  welcome Sonu..........Motiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii  tongue3
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2005, 10:33:03 PM »
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taklo bhut petugey samjhey na  veysey yea tumney pic keski lagi hai tim ladki kab baney laughing4laughing4
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2006, 05:25:08 AM »
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zindgi meharbaan... aisa ho nahi sakta
dobaara yeh dil yuin hi...kho nahi sakta
itna sataaya gaya hai ki bass puucho mat
sataaney waaley ko dil sey...bhula nahi ja sakta
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