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                       haalat   chehre  se   bayaa.n   hoti    rahi...,
                       naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

                       chaand   kal   aayaa   to  dareeche  pe   mere...,
                       jaane  kyon  chaandni   nihaa.n  hoti     rahi...,

                       isi    khauf    mein   ye   aag   kaisi   hai...,
                       zindagi    apni   to   dhuwaa.n    hoti  rahi...,

                       ek   zara   kya   muskuraai   mujhe   dekh wo...,
                       mat  puchiye  dharkan  phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

                       wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
                       kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2012, 12:36:36 PM »
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                       haalat   chehre  se   bayaa.n   hoti    rahi...,
                       naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

                       chaand   kal   aaye   to  dareeche  pe   mere...,
                       jaane  kyon  chaandni  per nihaa.n  hoti rahi...,

                       isi    khauf    mein   ye   aag   kaisi   hai...,
                       zindagi    apni   to   dhuwaa.n    hoti  rahi...,

                       ek   zara   kya   muskuraai   mujhe   dekh wo...,
                       mat  puchiye  dharkan  phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

                       wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
                       kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,

lajawaab A. B
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2012, 12:57:07 PM »
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waah adil ji bohut khub
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2012, 02:46:17 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


Wallaah janab bade dinoN baad koi kalaam pesh ki aapne aur
behad khoob pesh ki... Usual Smile

Behad gehre aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafz diye
haiN janab... bade hi khoobsurat ashaar kahe haiN... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





                       haalat   chehre  se   bayaa.n   hoti    rahi...,
                       naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

Kia kahne janab waaH behad gehra aur umda sher padha hai daad...

                       chaand   kal   aayaa   to  dareeche  pe   mere...,
                       jaane  kyon  chaandni   nihaa.n  hoti     rahi...,

Bahut khoob daad...

                       isi    khauf    mein   ye   aag   kaisi   hai...,
                       zindagi    apni   to   dhuwaa.n    hoti  rahi...,

Achcha khayaal hai janab par khul nahi paya.. shayad kuch
tarmeem ki zarurat hai...


                       ek   zara   kya   muskuraai   mujhe   dekh wo...,
                       mat  puchiye  dharkan  phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

Kia kahne janab waaH bahut khoob daad daad daad..

                       wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
                       kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,

Bahut khoob janab badi achchi kalaam rahi..  Maqta bhi umdaa hua
hai daad... Usual Smile



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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2012, 03:21:24 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2012, 03:48:44 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 waah waah , bahut  khoob ,  adil  bechain  saheb .
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2012, 04:32:18 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2012, 06:20:52 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 07:27:21 PM »
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bahut hi umda
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 11:31:26 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Adil bhai
maqta shaandaar kaha aapne.
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 11:52:00 PM »
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                       haalat   chehre  se   bayaa.n   hoti    rahi...,
                       naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

                       chaand   kal   aayaa   to  dareeche  pe   mere...,
                       jaane  kyon  chaandni   nihaa.n  hoti     rahi...,

                       isi    khauf    mein   ye   aag   kaisi   hai...,
                       zindagi    apni   to   dhuwaa.n    hoti  rahi...,

                       ek   zara   kya   muskuraai   mujhe   dekh wo...,
                       mat  puchiye  dharkan  phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

                       wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
                       kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,


janaab ADIL SAHAAB , AS SALAAM AALE KUM ,aap ka  kalaam  padha , dil khush ho gaya, zindigi se  kafi manoos laga aap ka ye kalaam ,dil se aah nikalti hai jo  waah waah kahne ko majboor  kar deti hai.......daad qubool karen ....ur's Rehan Mubarak "Tanhaa" tearyeyed
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2013, 08:36:33 PM »
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waah adil ji bohut khub

shukriya sahill ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2013, 08:53:27 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


Wallaah janab bade dinoN baad koi kalaam pesh ki aapne aur
behad khoob pesh ki... Usual Smile

Behad gehre aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafz diye
haiN janab... bade hi khoobsurat ashaar kahe haiN... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



bahut shukriya janab parwaz sahab
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2013, 08:54:44 PM »
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