~ * Khud Ko * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on August 19, 2010, 10:12:58 AM
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Is jamane ne hame sab kucch dilaya he,

fir bhi hamne zindgi me kuchh nahi paya he,

apne aapko milne bahot tarsate he,

khud ko ham khud se karib lana chahte he....
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 10:27:44 AM »
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bahut shandar he par ek bat kahu bura mat maniyega kuchh adhoora sa lag raha he~

kuchh galat kah ho maafi chahta hu~
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2010, 10:34:34 AM »
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sukriya...
bura kyu lagega ji,
aap hi pura kar dijiye....
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2010, 06:45:44 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Devangi jee..!
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2010, 08:48:29 PM »
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bahut khoob dev...
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2010, 07:09:25 AM »
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bahut shandar he par ek bat kahu bura mat maniyega kuchh adhoora sa lag raha he~

kuchh galat kah ho maafi chahta hu~

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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2010, 07:11:51 AM »
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Is jamane ne hame sab kucch dilaya he,

fir bhi hamne zindgi me kuchh nahi paya he,

apne aapko milne bahot tarsate he,

khud ko ham khud se karib lana chahte he....


mujhe adhura sa nahin laga....bht achcha likha hai aapne...
iss leeling ko 4 lines me kehna zara mushkil hai par aapne apni feel bata di.......

maine ise fir likha hai kahiye kaisa laga......

Is jamane ne hame sab kucch dilaya hai,
Fir bhi hamne zindgi me kuchh nahi paya hai,

Apne aapko milne ko bahot tarsate he,
Najane kyun khudko dundh nahin pate hain

Ek kashmakash si har waqt rehti hai
Dil aur dimag me na jane kyun nahin banti hai

Hum khudse hi ladte rehte hain
Ajeeb se haalat me hum bhatakte rehte hain

Kuch apne aap ko jaanna chahte hain
khud ko ham khud se karib lana chahte hai....
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«Reply #7 on: August 20, 2010, 09:05:38 AM »
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sukriya.......

Bahaut khoob Devangi jee..!

bahut khoob dev...

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«Reply #8 on: August 20, 2010, 09:09:13 AM »
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ye to apni apni soch he kasak, inko laga ki adhura he bata diya....
bahot aachha laga ki tumne our 4 lines add ki, aese sath dete rehna....

thanks for additing.... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 20, 2010, 09:16:06 AM »
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bahu saras lakhyu chhe Devangi Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 20, 2010, 09:22:19 AM »
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aabhar rancho ji.......
bahu saras lakhyu chhe Devangi Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2010, 08:11:16 AM »
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Is jamane ne hame sab kucch dilaya he,

fir bhi hamne zindgi me kuchh nahi paya he,

apne aapko milne bahot tarsate he,

khud ko ham khud se karib lana chahte he....


GOOD ONE THINK JI

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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 09:53:18 AM »
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sukriya marhoom ji.......
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 02:52:02 AM »
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Is jamane ne hame sab kucch dilaya he,

fir bhi hamne zindgi me kuchh nahi paya he,

apne aapko milne bahot tarsate he,

khud ko ham khud se karib lana chahte he....


Good one Dev Ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2010, 04:35:48 AM »
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bahut khoob Deevangi sis,Kasak ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya.wonderful creation Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause 
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