Kisey patah hai, yahaan kaa, wahaan miley, na miley?

by abdbundeli on June 11, 2009, 12:59:04 PM
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Aaj dil khol key mil lo: whaan miley, na miley?
Deed-e-saahil-e-bahr-o-aasmaan miley, na miley?

Yeh zameen paak, yeh dariyah, yeh itrayez hawaa!
Kahaan chaley ho? Wahaan gulsitaan miley, na miley?

Shaakh-e-gulbun pai aashiyaan na banaa, ae bulbul!
Baag-e-gulcheen hai, shaakh-o-aashiyan miley, na miley?

Woh hifaazat key liye, qatl kareyngey ham ko;
Aaj aabaad hai, jo yeh makaan: miley, na miley?

Jo ataa ho, usey sougaat samajh kar ley ley;
Kisey patah hai, yahaan kaa, wahaan miley, na miley?

Jo nigaahoun mein hai, baahoun mein hai,  saansoun mein hai;
Haseen lamhah yeh mouzoon samaan miley, na miley?

Aaj paaindah hai, ‘abd’, waqaar-e-insaanee;  
Kyaa patah, kal kaheen naamonishaan miley, na miley?

                                                       - abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2009, 05:23:22 PM »
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MashaAllah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai aapne. Bahed Umda !
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2009, 05:31:00 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji, Laajawab poetry
Kamaal hai, wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2009, 09:44:41 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji ,kamaal ka likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2009, 09:55:53 PM »
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LAJAWAB QALAM PESH KIYA ABD JI
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2009, 01:34:57 AM »
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Aaj dil khol key mil lo: whaan miley, na miley?
Deed-e-saahil-e-bahr-o-aasmaan miley, na miley?

Yeh zameen paak, yeh dariyah, yeh itrayez hawaa!
Kahaan chaley ho? Wahaan gulsitaan miley, na miley?

Shaakh-e-gulbun pai aashiyaan na banaa, ae bulbul!
Baag-e-gulcheen hai, shaakh-o-aashiyan miley, na miley?

Woh hifaazat key liye, qatl kareyngey ham ko;
Aaj aabaad hai, jo yeh makaan: miley, na miley?

Jo ataa ho, usey sougaat samajh kar ley ley;
Kisey patah hai, yahaan kaa, wahaan miley, na miley?

Jo nigaahoun mein hai, baahoun mein hai,  saansoun mein hai;
Haseen lamhah yeh mouzoon samaan miley, na miley?

Aaj paaindah hai, ‘abd’, waqaar-e-insaanee; 
Kyaa patah, kal kaheen naamonishaan miley, na miley?

                                                       - abd bundeli



Waah Waah... Bahut he khubsurat Ghazal hai, Abd JiApplause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2009, 03:38:48 AM »
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MashaAllah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai aapne. Bahed Umda !
Thanks a lot, Sophi ji!
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2009, 03:43:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji, Laajawab poetry
Kamaal hai, wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
Thanks a lot, SARVESH RASTOGI ji!
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2009, 03:44:20 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji ,kamaal ka likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2009, 03:45:01 AM »
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LAJAWAB QALAM PESH KIYA ABD JI
Thanks a lot, shab ji!
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2009, 03:45:55 AM »
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Waah Waah... Bahut he khubsurat Ghazal hai, Abd JiApplause Applause
Thanks a lot, Deepati ji!
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2009, 07:20:50 AM »
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bhot khobsorat kalam hai apka abd ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2009, 08:12:38 AM »
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bhot khobsorat kalam hai apka abd ji
Thanks a lot, chitralsony ji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2009, 06:27:47 PM »
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Aaj dil khol key mil lo: whaan miley, na miley?
Deed-e-saahil-e-bahr-o-aasmaan miley, na miley?

Yeh zameen paak, yeh dariyah, yeh itrayez hawaa!
Kahaan chaley ho? Wahaan gulsitaan miley, na miley?

Shaakh-e-gulbun pai aashiyaan na banaa, ae bulbul!
Baag-e-gulcheen hai, shaakh-o-aashiyan miley, na miley?

Woh hifaazat key liye, qatl kareyngey ham ko;
Aaj aabaad hai, jo yeh makaan: miley, na miley?

Jo ataa ho, usey sougaat samajh kar ley ley;
Kisey patah hai, yahaan kaa, wahaan miley, na miley?

Jo nigaahoun mein hai, baahoun mein hai,  saansoun mein hai;
Haseen lamhah yeh mouzoon samaan miley, na miley?

Aaj paaindah hai, ‘abd’, waqaar-e-insaanee; 
Kyaa patah, kal kaheen naamonishaan miley, na miley?

                                                       - abd bundeli



Bahut khoobsurat gazal likha hai aapne Uncle ji. Daad kabul kijiyega  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: July 19, 2009, 06:15:03 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat gazal likha hai aapne Uncle ji. Daad kabul kijiyega  Thumbs UP
Thanks a lot Roja!
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