Kyaa patah fir yeh bag-e-baagbaan miley, na miley?

by abdbundeli on June 10, 2009, 09:01:50 AM
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Jahaan rawaan hai woh raah-e-rawaan miley, na miley?
Kisey patah hai, ki, woh mehrbaan miley, na miley?

Chalaa hun khojney, pai naqsh-e-paa na pahichaanoon;
Itnee raahoun mein bhi us kaa nishaan miley, na miley?

Nidaa hai, yaa ki, sadaa hai, ki kyaa hai, koun kahey?
Moosiqee, moosiqaar khushnumaan miley, na miley?

Roo-b-roo baad-e-gulistaan hai, shukra hai, khush huun;
Kyaa patah fir yeh bag-e-baagbaan miley, na miley?

Kahaan chalaa hai, ‘abd’, kaarwaan-e-jaw ki taraf?
Gubaar Kho na jaaye, kaarwaan miley, na miley?

                                          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2009, 10:06:11 AM »
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Bohot hi khoobsurat....bohot hi khoob dear Babu Ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2009, 10:11:23 AM »
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Bohut khoob Abd ji...
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 11:07:04 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 10, 2009, 10:06:11 AM
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Bohot hi khoobsurat....bohot hi khoob dear Babu Ji
Shukriyah Talat bitia!
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2009, 11:08:20 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on June 10, 2009, 10:11:23 AM
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Bohut khoob Abd ji...
Thanks a lot, honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 11:16:13 AM »
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Garg Sahib,
Khoobsurat  ghazal hai, bahut laye men hai khoobsurat alfaaz ke sang...
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 11:37:12 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 10, 2009, 11:16:13 AM
Garg Sahib,
Khoobsurat  ghazal hai, bahut laye men hai khoobsurat alfaaz ke sang...
Shukriyah syednaami ji! I'm happy, you liked it!
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 12:35:45 PM »
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Tu bhi dede Ghayel ko badnamiya

Aye Parsa phir yeh mauka miley na miley

-SG-
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 01:35:38 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 10, 2009, 12:35:45 PM

Tu bhi dede Ghayel ko badnamiya

Aye Parsa phir yeh mauka miley na miley

-SG-

Laakh mouqey abhee aayengey zeest mein,
Yeh to hai ibtidah, paas aaou yahaan!
Koun khushnaam hotaa hai is umra mein?
Ab bhi hai waqt, bas muskuraaou wahaan!!

                          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 01:43:39 PM »
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Kya baat hai Bundeli Saheb
Bahut bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 01:47:28 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 10, 2009, 01:35:38 PM
Laakh mouqey abhee aayengey zeest mein,
Yeh to hai ibtidah, paas aaou yahaan!
Koun khushnaam hotaa hai is umra mein?
Ab bhi hai waqt, bas muskuraaou wahaan!!

                          - abd bundeli


Muskurane ki koi wajah bhi to ho

Jise apna kahe aisa hum_nawaZ koi to ho

Lakh mauko ka kaise kare ABD intezaar

Ek pal yaha jeene ka aasra koi to ho

-SG-
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 02:12:16 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 10, 2009, 01:43:39 PM
Kya baat hai Bundeli Saheb
Bahut bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
Shukriyah SARVESH RASTOGI ji!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 02:23:28 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 10, 2009, 01:47:28 PM

Muskurane ki koi wajah bhi to ho
Jise apna kahe aisa hum_nawaZ koi to ho

Lakh mauko ka kaise kare ABD intezaar

Ek pal yaha jeene ka aasra koi to ho

-SG-
Aasrey key liye jhuk key deykho zaraa,
Koun seeney mein har pal rawaan hai wahaan?
Andleebee sadaayen sunou gour sey;
Mouj hai har taraf zindagee hai jawaan!!

               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2013, 03:27:50 AM »
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nice.
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2013, 02:06:13 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 23, 2013, 03:27:50 AM
nice.

Thanks!
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