kya chahti hun...

by mixie on December 31, 2013, 06:28:13 AM
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नया चाँद, सूरज नया चाहती हूँ
इक आँगन सितारों भरा चाहती हूँ

मेरे पाँव की लकीरें थक चुकी हैं
मैं मंज़िल का अब कुछ पता चाहती हूँ

उमड़ते जज़बातों को हथेली पे रख
संग तुम्हारे चलो उड़ना चाहती हूँ

तुम्हारी खूबियों में अब देखना मैं
कोई बात सबसे जुदा चाहती हूँ

मैं अपने ज़ेहन की तंग गलियों में
इक खुला आसमां पाना चाहती हूँ

naya chaand, suraj naya chahti hun
ik aangan sitaron bhara chahti hun

mere paanv ki lakeerein thak chuki hain
main manzil ka ab kuchh pata chahti hun

umadte jazbaton ko hatheli pe rakh
sang tumhare chalo udna chahti hun

tumhari khubiyon mein ab dekhna main
koi baat sabse juda chahti hun

main apne zehan ki tang galiyon mein
ik khula aasman paana chahti hun
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2013, 06:57:52 AM »
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Buhat khoobsurat matlaa hay aap ki ghazal ka...

Naya chaand, sooraj naya chahti hun
Ik aangan sitaaron bhara chahti hun

Main manzil ka ab kuch pata chahti hun

Koi baat sub say juda chahti hun


Buhat khoob misray hen.... Baki misray in misron k saath rythem men set kejay..
I can see  a good poet inside u...
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2013, 07:07:30 AM »
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Thank you very much janaab vb
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«Reply #3 on: December 31, 2013, 07:52:15 AM »
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Good one.keep it up.
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«Reply #4 on: December 31, 2013, 01:59:32 PM »
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ek rau tumhaaree is achhee koshish ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: December 31, 2013, 02:41:19 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2013, 03:01:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2013, 03:44:55 PM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2013, 05:39:08 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

very nice
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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2013, 06:08:56 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah.... badi pyaari peshkash mixie ji... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #10 on: December 31, 2013, 07:35:03 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob...
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