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by Mansi_d_archi on November 21, 2004, 10:53:24 AM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #15 on: December 01, 2004, 05:50:25 AM »
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ishq hue humein zamana ho gaya,
yaadon ka karvaan ab puraana  ho gaya
duniya badal gayi or yaar begana ho gaya
aaya tha ek toofaan jo sab udaa kar le gaya
 
likha karte the kabhi hum bhi dil  kii kitaab
banate bigaadte woh sunehre khwaab
saason ka silsila kuch aisa tha janaab
kya kahein hum,samajh sakte hain aap

wowwowowow excellent mansi.........bahot khoob...........

main bhi do line aap ke likh doon jara gaur kariyega aap log......

phoolon ka bikharna tu muqaddar hi tha lekin
kuch is mein hawaon ki siyasat bhi buhat thi...........
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #16 on: December 01, 2004, 03:06:14 PM »
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thanx a lot people ! Plz do help me wid ur notes
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akela
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«Reply #17 on: December 06, 2004, 08:47:06 PM »
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nice all
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #18 on: December 07, 2004, 04:07:07 PM »
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nice Waheed
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #19 on: December 08, 2004, 07:12:39 PM »
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barasta hai kehar kismat ka jis par
rakhta hai har kadam wo ghis-ghis kar

baitha hai akela footpath par
seh raha jalti garmi uska nanga sar
bhudaape par bhi daya na karta uspe mausam ka keher
ek saa hota uske liye har ek shaam har ek dopeher
dekha aaj kareeb se,sab par nahi n zindagi ki meher
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akela
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«Reply #20 on: December 08, 2004, 07:20:40 PM »
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bahoot khoob mansi ji
par baitha hai akela footpath par?Huh?? Puzzled !
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #21 on: December 08, 2004, 07:24:16 PM »
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bahoot khoob mansi ji
par baitha hai akela footpath par?Huh?? Puzzled !



lol.... :wink: main to buddhe ki baat kar rahi thi,aap to senti ho gye
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akela
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«Reply #22 on: December 08, 2004, 07:37:13 PM »
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hmmm samjha Usual Smile
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #23 on: December 08, 2004, 07:45:06 PM »
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na sar pe chhat hai,na zameen par kuch bichhaane ko
zulmo ke is toofan mein sardi bhi aayi ab keher barsaane ko
jaise mila tha wahi akela gareeb raato-raat sataane ko
na koi apna hai,na aansoo hain kisi par bahaane ko
kehti hai fir bhi zindagi kismat ko yu hi sataane ko
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akela
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«Reply #24 on: December 08, 2004, 08:02:11 PM »
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wah!!!!!

muskurahat do pal ki hai,
auur gam hai yaha lakh sunane ko
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #25 on: December 08, 2004, 08:22:38 PM »
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kya kahen jab koi nahin paas gum bhi sunaane ko
us raat ke baad yaaden hi bachi,koi na raha subeh uthaane ko
na koi kuch kehta hai usse,na koi bacha apna kehlaane ko
laga hai apna ateet baaki kuch yaadon ko jhuthlaane ko


......dedicated 2 d old man who's daily sittin on d footpath, makin tea 4 himself,tryin 2 hum a song ,playin wid a box ........nthn 2 do....no1 2 talk 2.....no hopes.no desires.....jus breathin  n pacin up on life's cruel roads (lukin at d traffic )
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«Reply #26 on: December 09, 2004, 11:25:04 AM »
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Quote from: "akela"
bahoot khoob mansi ji
par baitha hai akela footpath par?Huh?? Puzzled !



lol.... :wink: main to buddhe ki baat kar rahi thi,aap to senti ho gye


lol both... good ones mansi.. keep them coming Usual Smile
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #27 on: December 09, 2004, 02:57:07 PM »
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thanx Nishita
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #28 on: December 09, 2004, 03:15:42 PM »
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kya kahen jab koi nahin paas gum bhi sunaane ko
us raat ke baad yaaden hi bachi,koi na raha subeh uthaane ko
na koi kuch kehta hai usse,na koi bacha apna kehlaane ko
laga hai apna ateet baaki kuch yaadon ko jhuthlaane ko


......dedicated 2 d old man who's daily sittin on d footpath, makin tea 4 himself,tryin 2 hum a song ,playin wid a box ........nthn 2 do....no1 2 talk 2.....no hopes.no desires.....jus breathin  n pacin up on life's cruel roads (lukin at d traffic )



amazing vvork by u dear...

line 2 is not too gud...

but lines 3 and 4 r superb mansi!!!
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«Reply #29 on: December 09, 2004, 03:40:30 PM »
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thanx Chimpu......but dun leave yoindia,ok! :evil:
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