Life~

by Mansi_d_archi on November 21, 2004, 10:53:24 AM

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shairi - E - Zindagi > Topic: Life~

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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #60 on: December 23, 2004, 11:04:32 AM »

thts wht i say ****ing ur own thread :wink: lol


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #61 on: December 23, 2004, 11:19:14 AM »

aaj wo pee raha hai ateet ka dard khoyi aankhe bin
kyonki aaj dekhi usne fir kuch yaadein haseen
jaante ho kyo aaj nahi aayi duniya dekh kar use ghin
yaad aayi use maa ki muskurahat ,aaj hai uska janamdin

.......these lines r my imagination now as i dun have nethin 2 write abt his feelings now...enuff of dat stuff! :|


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #62 on: December 23, 2004, 11:21:12 AM »

nice


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #63 on: December 23, 2004, 11:27:50 AM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

nice

thx Chimpuji!!Celebrate his b'day wid me glasses2

:wink: lol

naach rahi hai man mein ek leher
saja raha hai 1 din ka sapna shaam-dopeher
dekhta hai khushiyo se saji ek shaam
duniya kahe 'aaj ka din tumhaare naam!'


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #64 on: December 23, 2004, 02:24:56 PM »

its nice mansi ji


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #65 on: December 23, 2004, 02:30:49 PM »

thx..

i'll continue it later..ok cya glasses2


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #66 on: December 23, 2004, 03:34:20 PM »

yes mansi... sure.. anytime


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #67 on: December 24, 2004, 06:06:40 PM »

Here i continue d poem again........knw u can't enjoy but atleast feel his pain on his b'day!!
lol

dekh raha hai aasmaan mein yu
poochta ho jaise'main hi akela kyo?'
fir kuch socha,fir kuch khayaal aaya
'reh gya main ban ke bas ek saaya'

yu to har janamdin ki raat akeli hi thi
zindagi jeene ki iccha bhi ek paheli si thi
na tha is budhe ko koi bistar udhaane ko
bas ye chaadar or chaye ki pyaali uski saheli thi


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #68 on: December 24, 2004, 06:13:48 PM »

nice


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #69 on: December 24, 2004, 06:17:58 PM »

thanx!!


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #70 on: December 28, 2004, 12:23:58 AM »

khatam karo yaar buddhe ko or likha ni jata!
so Chimpu ji u suggest me smthn....my new topic?


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #71 on: December 28, 2004, 07:57:41 AM »

garden... paradise... flowers... god?


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #72 on: December 28, 2004, 09:07:29 AM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

garden... paradise... flowers... god?

ummm ya nice.....but im gonna write smthn related 2 life,some person,God wud b a gr8 option ..right?


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #73 on: December 28, 2004, 09:30:03 AM »

i'd only say dont limit your creativity to love and life... think vast...

write about moon, water, flowers, paradise, sun, God, music, blood, colors!!!

there are so many things!
u are a good writer. dont limit yourself.

sorry to myself i used 'god' instead of 'God' in last post