Life~

by Mansi_d_archi on November 21, 2004, 10:53:24 AM
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Some call it bed of roses,
Some feel its cruel
But the irony is dat it is dual.
The former is just a myth
Comes in d wee hours,
Deserts our souls behind d bars.
D latter depicts its true sense
For which courage acts as d incense

For so long I’ve been wondering
Lookin forward 2 d upcoming
Wud there be an end 2 my mood swing?
Will I get 2 c my desires dance and hopes sing?
Lets keep fingers crossed & c wat does fortune bring.

At times, I pray if a friend cud ring
Life sounds still widout a li’l zing
School time was my best tune sung
Old friends r where my heart is clung

Viewing my life through n through.
Wud u say its jus a season of blue?
Having seen so much I feel its really tough
Now you people won’t ever say “The World is not Enough”!
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nishita
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2004, 05:10:26 PM »
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wow amazing..!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2004, 07:16:57 PM »
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Nice!!!
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Soheb_Khan
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2004, 07:41:43 PM »
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awesome Mansi
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2004, 03:01:36 PM »
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wow mansi...
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2004, 11:23:47 AM »
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Thanx people,it was my 1st attempt 2 make u feel sleepy :twisted: but u guys r so sweet  :wink: Really overwhelmned Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2004, 11:35:04 AM »
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ishq hue humein zamana ho gaya,
yaadon ka karvaan ab puraana  ho gaya
duniya badal gayi or yaar begana ho gaya
aaya tha ek toofaan jo sab udaa kar le gaya
 
likha karte the kabhi hum bhi dil  kii kitaab
banate bigaadte woh sunehre khwaab
saason ka silsila kuch aisa tha janaab
kya kahein hum,samajh sakte hain aap
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2004, 08:56:20 PM »
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superrrbbbbb shayriii Usual Smile
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2004, 03:22:16 AM »
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thanx people !
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2004, 09:14:21 AM »
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aasmaan se lagti dharti jitni pyaari
utni hi haseen hai zindagi ke foolon ki kyaari
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«Reply #10 on: November 29, 2004, 04:33:35 PM »
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Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"
ishq hue humein zamana ho gaya,
yaadon ka karvaan ab puraana  ho gaya
duniya badal gayi or yaar begana ho gaya
aaya tha ek toofaan jo sab udaa kar le gaya
 
likha karte the kabhi hum bhi dil  kii kitaab
banate bigaadte woh sunehre khwaab
saason ka silsila kuch aisa tha janaab
kya kahein hum,samajh sakte hain aap


i liked the first sher the most! bohot ache!
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immi
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2004, 04:37:21 PM »
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Very nice Mansi ..
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #12 on: November 30, 2004, 12:26:40 PM »
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thanx Meena n Immi ! Usual Smile

Those lines jus overflowed from my heart. :wink:
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #13 on: November 30, 2004, 12:27:18 PM »
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thanx Meena n Immi ! Usual Smile

Those lines jus overflowed from my heart. :wink:
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«Reply #14 on: November 30, 2004, 10:36:49 PM »
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ujaagar hua woh chehra aaj
jiske buna karti thi khwaab
aisa lage uska har andaaz
jaise chakor ko chaand pe naaz

tod dii nigaahon ne haya ki laaj
chod diye maine saare kaaj
jab se bana woh mera sartaaj


samajh na aaye mujhe yeh raaz
kyo dil na aaye mera use chaahne se baaz
kyo is anjaani dhun pe hai is qadar naaz
ki gaaye dil ek madhosh sa saaz
:wink:
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