****Maut se ladke****

by jannatjahan on May 29, 2009, 10:24:53 AM
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maine ye kavita apni zindagi aur maut ki ladai par likha hai...mai jab ye likh rahi thi meri aankhein nam thi...ye kavita mere dil ke kareeb hai....

Chal pade the kadam
anjaan si raah thi
tha dard seene me
aur labon par aah thi
har shay paheli bana
saamne najar aaya
maine khud ko
veerano me khada paya
zindagi ki maut se
ho rahi thi zaddozahad
lagta tha paar kar jaungi mai
zindagi ki sarhad
raahein thi muskil bhari
maut ka safar tha
laut aayee un raahon se
sayad kisi ki duaon me asar bahut tha
thi aisi ghadi
maut khel rahi thi aank michauli
kehti thi aa tham le hath
ban ja aa meri saheli
phir ye kadam mere
baharon me laut aaye hain
aaj in aankhon ko
zindagi ke najare khub bhaye hain
hain aankhein nam
soch kar ki hun phir sath sabke
aaj laut aayee hun mai sabke beech
maut se ladke......
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2009, 10:27:49 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Jannat Ji, bohot achcha likha hai...Very touching...Kehte hain "Jis Ka Ho Haami Khuda, Usko Mita Sakta Hai Kaun" ! Zindagi ki nayi subah mubarak ho aapko !
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2009, 10:33:47 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Likaha hai JJ Dear, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Welcome back to yoindia family and shayri forums. icon_flower

Shally.

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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2009, 10:36:47 AM »
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Jannat,

Bahut jazbaati kavita likhi hai tumne !

May The Almighty shower His choicest Blessings on you
and you live a long healthy life. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2009, 10:38:40 AM »
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is nayi zindgi ka har safar aapke liye khushnuma ho bas yahi dua hai aapke liye khush rahe or sabko khushi dete rahe
god bless you..................
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2009, 11:15:27 AM »
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Bahut Achi Kavita Likhi Hai Aapne.Iska Ek Ek Word Mere Dil Ko Chu Gaya.
Khuda Se Aapki Salamati Ki Dua Karta Hoon.
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2009, 11:17:14 AM »
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Welcome Ji, Welcome, Bohat KHushi Hui Shweta Tumhe Apne Beech Dekhkar, May Allah Bless you,.

And Nice Poetry Yaar
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2009, 04:10:28 PM »
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Waah waah bahoot hi khoob Likha hai aapne.. tho Kamal kar diya..

Dua hai Jaldi se teek ho jao puri tarah.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2009, 04:17:01 PM »
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Shweta Dear.. aapko Wapas Yahan dekh kar Bahut Khushi ho rahi hai..!! Upar wale se ab yehi dua rahegi ki Humari Is Dost ab Kabhi Koi Dard-o-Gam Na De.. Humesha aapka Daaman Khushiyon se Bhara rahe..!!

Dil Ko Chhoo Jane wale alfaaz likhe Hain aapne.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2009, 04:29:27 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Shweta.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapko Waapas Dekh Kar,Behad Khushi Hui Hai..Khuda Aapko Har Dukh-Takleef Se Door Rakhe,Aapko Sehat Bakhse,Aur Hamesha Aapka Daaman Khushiyon Se bhara Rahe..

Take Care...and keep smiling!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2009, 08:03:25 PM »
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So good to see you here again Shweta.

our prayers are always with you, Hope Allah takes care of this sweetest and the most person on the earth.

God Bless you today,always and forever.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2009, 09:28:31 PM »
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Beautiful! Very touching!

Wah Wah!!
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2009, 01:47:20 AM »
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very very nice jannat ji,kaise hai aap.
bahut kushi hua aap ko phir se yo mein dekh kar,
god bless you. very touching. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2009, 09:23:17 AM »
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Thanks my Dear N sweet Frnds... Usual Smile
Aaj mai yahan hun to sirf aur sirf aapki duaaon ki badaulat... notworthy
Itne pyaar aur apnepan ki aadat nahi..is pyaar ko dekh kar aankhen bhar aayee..
mujhse apni dosti ki daulat kabhi mat chiniyega..... Usual Smile
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