~~~Meri Talash~~~

by pankshivam on November 23, 2008, 05:28:32 PM
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Raho Me Mujhe Zindagi Ki Talash Thi
The Kitane Gam Lekin Khushiyan Kahi Aaspaas Thi...

Milati Rahi Manjile
Lekin Dhadkan Kyun Udaas Thi..

The Kabhi Mayus Tanhayi Me
Toh Kahin Dil Me Kamyabi Ki Pyaas Thi..

Aasan Nahi Thi Raahen Manjilo Ki
Par Kya Yeh Kam Hai Ke Raahen Mere Paas Thi..

Manjil Dar Majil Chalta Raha Fir Bhi
Jane kisiki Ummid Me Har Saans Thi..

~Pank~
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sjid hadayat
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2008, 05:45:40 PM »
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khial acha hay Pank ji, technique mien khuch kami hay... bohat achay khial ku sahi wazan aur beher mien kaha jaay tu zaiya ho jata hay... inhi sheroN pay dobara say gor kerien aur peish kerien bohat umda poetry ho jaay gi..

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Duaago
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2008, 06:25:14 PM »
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Shukriya Sajid Sahab!!!

apki Guide Line milti rahi to hamari techniq bhi dhire dhire sudhar jayegi

Compliment sunkar achha lagta hai ke mujhpe gaur kiya ja raha hai


Koshish Rahegi ke aur achhe se pesh kar sakun

Gaur karne ke liye Ek Bar aur Shukriya!!!
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sjid hadayat
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2008, 06:45:44 PM »
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Shukriya Sajid Sahab!!!

apki Guide Line milti rahi to hamari techniq bhi dhire dhire sudhar jayegi

Compliment sunkar achha lagta hai ke mujhpe gaur kiya ja raha hai


Koshish Rahegi ke aur achhe se pesh kar sakun

Gaur karne ke liye Ek Bar aur Shukriya!!!


Pank ji, U r welcome.. aik baat yad rakhien jis poetry mien khuch hota hay wo nazer mien aa je jati hay... tu iss mien mera koi kamal nahi.. aap k khial motasir kertay hien tu compliments day dieta hon.... Khoob say khoob likhtay rahien....
Shukria
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2008, 04:29:11 AM »
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bahut khoob likha ha aap na
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: November 24, 2008, 04:34:37 AM »
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nice work Pank
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2008, 04:53:02 AM »
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bohut khoob pank
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: November 24, 2008, 08:38:25 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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pankshivam
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2008, 06:20:19 PM »
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Shukriya Poojaji,Saloniji
Shukriya Ghayal Sahab
Shukriya Bhawanaji
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2013, 02:18:52 AM »
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Fantastic.
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