Muntazir main bhi kam nahin... Intezar !

by Intezar on October 16, 2010, 08:21:47 PM
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    Shor-o-gul ab wo sunaayi deta nahin kahin
    Jo tere hone se uthta tha is dil mein kahin…
                   lab khamosh hai ab, siskiya bhi aati nahin ab to
                   kho gaya hai dil bhi mera ab is bheed mein kahin,


    badi shiddat se chaha tujhe, bandagi bhi thi uski,aur
    har pal tujhe rakha tha  humne apni duaao mein kahin

    kabhi raas bhi  na aaya unke hontho se lag kar jeena  hume
    ab ye haalat, ki hum dhoondte hai paani ret ke sehra mein kahin

    ek roz mein wo aalam itna badal gaya wo aab  se aag  ho gaya
    phir yaad aaya khud chhod aaye the chingaari dariya mein kahin

    is fareb se kya rakhte hum khud ko mehfooz,jab jalna hi tha hume
    palta raha chupke se koi banke mukhbir mere raazo.n mein kahin

    waise to wo shakhs laakh khwabeeda meri maut ka hoga shayad
    maang li hogi jaan bhi meri shayad usne apne waado mein kahin…

    muntazir main bhi kam nahin meri lahad ki takmeel ka “Intezar”
    nahi banti to na sahi dafan kar do mujhe meri Yaadon mein kahin…!


                                                   Shukriya
                                                   Intezar !

    Aab = paani
    raazo.n= secrets
    khwabeeda= dreamy
    muntazir = in waiting,
    lahad= kabra
    takmeel= completion
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2010, 11:42:49 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2010, 12:25:12 PM »
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Janab Intezar Sahab Aadaab!


Behad umdaa ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne
Waah jee waah behad dilfareb aur dikash andaaz e bayaaN
meiN aapne jitne bhi ashaar likhe hai bahor umdaa likhe hai
Daad dil se daad ........ Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye..... "Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile
 
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2010, 10:02:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne bhai...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2010, 10:04:31 PM »
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shukriya Kasak ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya !

Intezar !

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

behtareeennnnnnnnnnn
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2010, 10:05:57 PM »
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parwaaz sahab aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aapne ise pasand kiya !

Intezar !

Janab Intezar Sahab Aadaab!


Behad umdaa ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne
Waah jee waah behad dilfareb aur dikash andaaz e bayaaN
meiN aapne jitne bhi ashaar likhe hai bahor umdaa likhe hai
Daad dil se daad ........ Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye..... "Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile
 

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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2010, 10:07:18 PM »
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kapil bhai... bahut bahut shukriya aapka.... dil se !

Intezar !

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne bhai...!!!

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