Naseeb Me Likha Hai Kya Ye Koun Janta Hai...........Touhid

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Mere pyare YOindia ke dosto ko mera salaam.. Usual Smile

Ye poetry likhne ke pichhe ek chhoti si kahani hai, ek din kisi dost ki request pe likhi thi, wo ghazal nahi chahta tha balki ye chahta tha ke sidhe saadhe lafzon me mai 'Naseeb' ke baare likh kar du taaki use jyada sochne ki jarurat na pade, aur aasaani se samajh me bhi aa jaye., kai dost aise hote hai jinhe shayari/poetry se pyaar to hai lekin kai baar na samajhne ke wajah se wo use utna nahi jaan/samajh pate hai.. par fir bhi padhte hai.. Usual Smile

Isi thaought ko madde nazar rakhte hue maine sidhe saadhe zubaan me ye poetry likhi hai.. ummid karta hu aap logon ko pasand aaye.. Usual Smile

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Naseeb Me Likha Hai Kya Ye Koun Janta Hai.,
Kisko Yahaan Milega Kya Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Koi Mehnat Karta Hai Aur Koi Mashakkat Karta Hai.,
Kiske Naseeb Me Kitni Hai Mehnat Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Jab Kabhi Kisi Mushkil Se Pareshaan Hote Hai Hum.,
Kitni Hai Mushkilein Naseeb Me Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Aarzoo, Zustazoo, Mohabbat, Ibaadat, Duniya Wa Kudrat.,
Kiske Naseeb Me Hogi Kitni Nematein Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Koi Rehta Hai Ameer Gharane Me To Koi Muflishi Me Jeeta Hai.,
Kitni Milegi Daulat Hume Naseeb Ke Siwa Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Koi Maa Baap Ke Pyar Ko Tarasta Hai Koi Unse Door Rehta Hai.,
Kis Ko Hoti Hai Naseeb Maa Baap Ki Duaaye Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Zindagi Mili Hai To Mila Hai Naseeb Bhi Har Kisi Ko ‘Touhid’.,
Kosis Kab Hogi Mukammal Naseeb Ke Alawa Ye Koun Janta Hai..

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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2014, 10:34:03 AM »
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wah wah wah wah wah wah wah bohut khub
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वाह....बहुत खूब....
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Mere pyare YOindia ke dosto ko mera salaam.. Usual Smile

Ye poetry likhne ke pichhe ek chhoti si kahani hai, ek din kisi dost ki request pe likhi thi, wo ghazal nahi chahta tha balki ye chahta tha ke sidhe saadhe lafzon me mai 'Naseeb' ke baare likh kar du taaki use jyada sochne ki jarurat na pade, aur aasaani se samajh me bhi aa jaye., kai dost aise hote hai jinhe shayari/poetry se pyaar to hai lekin kai baar na samajhne ke wajah se wo use utna nahi jaan/samajh pate hai.. par fir bhi padhte hai.. Usual Smile

Isi thaought ko madde nazar rakhte hue maine sidhe saadhe zubaan me ye poetry likhi hai.. ummid karta hu aap logon ko pasand aaye.. Usual Smile

Shukriya Usual Smile Usual Smile



Naseeb Me Likha Hai Kya Ye Koun Janta Hai.,
Kisko Yahaan Milega Kya Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Koi Mehnat Karta Hai Aur Koi Mashakkat Karta Hai.,
Kiske Naseeb Me Kitni Hai Mehnat Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Jab Kabhi Kisi Mushkil Se Pareshaan Hote Hai Hum.,
Kitni Hai Mushkilein Naseeb Me Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Aarzoo, Zustazoo, Mohabbat, Ibaadat, Duniya Wa Kudrat.,
Kiske Naseeb Me Hogi Kitni Nematein Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Koi Rehta Hai Ameer Gharane Me To Koi Muflishi Me Jeeta Hai.,
Kitni Milegi Daulat Hume Naseeb Ke Siwa Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Koi Maa Baap Ke Pyar Ko Tarasta Hai Koi Unse Door Rehta Hai.,
Kis Ko Hoti Hai Naseeb Maa Baap Ki Duaaye Ye Koun Janta Hai..


Zindagi Mili Hai To Mila Hai Naseeb Bhi Har Kisi Ko ‘Touhid’.,
Kosis Kab Hogi Mukammal Naseeb Ke Alawa Ye Koun Janta Hai..




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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2014, 02:34:40 PM »
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kaafi achchi peshkash touhid ji.. sweeeeeeeeeeet and simpleeee...mujhe pasand aayi yeh peshkash... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaad....
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wah wah wah wah wah wah wah bohut khub

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