Ro Dene Wale Bhi Insaan Hote HaiN "Khwahish"

by khwaish on June 15, 2013, 06:56:28 PM
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Zabt Kehta Hai Khamoshi MeN Basar Ho Jaaye
Dard Ki Zidd Hai Duniya Ko Khabar Ho Jaaye.!!



Veeran Dil MeN Bhi Kuch Armaan Hote HaiN
Khamosh LaboN MeN Bhi Qaid Tufan Hote HaiN

Ab Darr Sa Lagta Hai Apno Ke Apnepan Se Mujhe
Zakhm Dene Wale Hi Pehle Meharbaan Hote HaiN

Pahuncha Hoon Maiqade mein To Peene Do Mujhe Saaqi
Janta Hoon Maye Se Mushkilen,Kahaan Asaan Hote haiN

Ek Khwaab Thaa Jo Dekh liyaa Tha Neend MeN Kabhi
Khwaab Ke  Tootne Par Hum Kyun Pashemaan Hote HaiN

Apni AankhoN MeN Bhi kaundh gayi Ek Bijlii Sii..!!!
Do Chaar Aansu Tapke,Ro Dene wale Bhi Insaan Hote HaiN

"Khwahish" Tez Tufaano MeN Bhi Chalne ka Hausla Rakhna.!!
BaarishoN Mein Jo Giir Jaaye Woh Kacche Makaan Hote HaiN


      
        ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2013, 07:07:01 PM »
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Waah waaah  waaah .... Ehsaas mein gehraayee, jazbaat mein thehraav aur bayaan mein rawaanee ... Dheron daad is khoobsurat qalaam par Khwahish ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2013, 07:07:20 PM »
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Waah waah waah khwaish ji. ek umda peshkash. jitni tareef kee jaaye kam hai.har baar ki tarah ek nayi soch ek naya andaaz. hazaron dili daad daad daad daad. aur in ashaaron ke kya kehne.

Zabt Kehta Hai Khamoshi MeN Basar Ho Jaaye
Dard Ki Zidd Hai Duniya Ko Khabar Ho Jaaye.!!

Ab Darr Sa Lagta Hai Apno Ke Apnepan Se Mujhe
Zakhm Dene Wale Hi Pehle Meharbaan Hote HaiN

Apni AankhoN MeN Bhi kaundh gayi Ek Bijlii Sii..!!!
Do Chaar Aansu Tapke,Ro Dene wale Bhi Insaan Hote HaiN

bahut bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2013, 07:13:43 PM »
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Khwashish ji, m speechless, every para depicts the pain within.
woh kehte hain na ki WaaH WaaH se gum e dard kam nahi hota, kitna bhi lafzo mei likh do, phir kambakhht bayaan nahi hota...........
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2013, 07:26:31 PM »
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Behad khoobsurat kalaam rahi jo zindagi ke naam rahi..bahut pasand ayi apki ye peshkassh..hazaron dili daad hamari taraf se..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2013, 07:32:09 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2013, 07:37:24 PM »
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wah wah wah ... bahut bahut hi khoob, bahut khoob ji

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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2013, 09:49:05 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2013, 10:33:13 PM »
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Bahut khooB
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2013, 10:41:31 PM »
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bohat ache khyalat o jazbat pash kiye aap ne iss ghazal meiN khwaish ji,............bohat bohat c daad,..............
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2013, 10:55:12 PM »
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one of the best of your's
very very impressive ghazal sirji
thanx a Lott for this ghazal
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2013, 12:41:23 AM »
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Zabt Kehta Hai Khamoshi MeN Basar Ho Jaaye
Dard Ki Zidd Hai Duniya Ko Khabar Ho Jaaye.!!



Veeran Dil MeN Bhi Kuch Armaan Hote HaiN
Khamosh LaboN MeN Bhi Qaid Tufan Hote HaiN

Ab Darr Sa Lagta Hai Apno Ke Apnepan Se Mujhe
Zakhm Dene Wale Hi Pehle Meharbaan Hote HaiN

Pahuncha Hoon Maiqade mein To Peene Do Mujhe Saaqi
Janta Hoon Maye Se Mushkilen,Kahaan Asaan Hote haiN

Ek Khwaab Thaa Jo Dekh liyaa Tha Neend MeN Kabhi
Khwaab Ke  Tootne Par Hum Kyun Pashemaan Hote HaiN

Apni AankhoN MeN Bhi kaundh gayi Ek Bijlii Sii..!!!
Do Chaar Aansu Tapke,Ro Dene wale Bhi Insaan Hote HaiN

"Khwahish" Tez Tufaano MeN Bhi Chalne ka Hausla Rakhna.!!
BaarishoN Mein Jo Giir Jaaye Woh Kacche Makaan Hote HaiN


       
        ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2013, 01:24:29 AM »
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kamal ka likhe ho khawish ji....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2013, 11:05:51 AM »
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. . .Apki Shyri ki Jitni tareef ki jaye kam hain Khwaish ji .
     
                 Ekkalag sa andaz baya.n ki hain apne.
   
     It is a Unique Presentation. Hats off to you!
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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2013, 03:06:32 PM »
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Zabt Kehta Hai Khamoshi MeN Basar Ho Jaaye
Dard Ki Zidd Hai Duniya Ko Khabar Ho Jaaye.!!



Veeran Dil MeN Bhi Kuch Armaan Hote HaiN
Khamosh LaboN MeN Bhi Qaid Tufan Hote HaiN

Ab Darr Sa Lagta Hai Apno Ke Apnepan Se Mujhe
Zakhm Dene Wale Hi Pehle Meharbaan Hote HaiN

Pahuncha Hoon Maiqade mein To Peene Do Mujhe Saaqi
Janta Hoon Maye Se Mushkilen,Kahaan Asaan Hote haiN

Ek Khwaab Thaa Jo Dekh liyaa Tha Neend MeN Kabhi
Khwaab Ke  Tootne Par Hum Kyun Pashemaan Hote HaiN

Apni AankhoN MeN Bhi kaundh gayi Ek Bijlii Sii..!!!
Do Chaar Aansu Tapke,Ro Dene wale Bhi Insaan Hote HaiN

"Khwahish" Tez Tufaano MeN Bhi Chalne ka Hausla Rakhna.!!
BaarishoN Mein Jo Giir Jaaye Woh Kacche Makaan Hote HaiN


       
        ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~



BAHUT KHOOB............
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