Zindagi MeN Har Cheez Ke Do Pehlu Hote HaiN "Khwahish"

by khwaish on June 11, 2013, 03:48:08 PM
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Chalo Kisi Sehra MeN Ghar Banaate HaiN...!!!!
Ke Bacche Kaapi Pe Jaise Shajar Banaate HaiN
Yeh Zindagi To Akele Guzar Nahi Sakti....!!!
Chalo Kisi Ko Shareek-e-Safar Banaate HaiN

    
     ~~~~Munnawar Raana~~~~~



Mitti Ke Khilono Se Bhara Hai Duniya Ka Bazaar Dekhna
Sabse Mushkil Hota Hai Kabhi Khud Ko Gunahgaar Dekhna

Kuch Buure Log To Hote Hi HaiN Iss Zameen Par Paida..!!
Dharam-Mazhab Se Pehle,Insaniyat Ke Kaun HaiN Tarafdaar Dekha

Do Niwaale Kisi Bhooke Ko Khila Do To Ek Sukoon Saa Mile
Iss Duniya MeN Milte HaiN,Dukh-Dard Ke Bhi Kharidaar Dekhna

Kuch Tum Kaho-Kuch Hum Suune,Kuch Hum Kahe-Kuch Tum Sunno
Par Apni Anaa Hi Ban Baith Thi Hain Sabse Badi Deewaar Dekhna

Kisi se Shikwe-ShikayateN HaiN To HaiN, Kaun Suljhaaye Unhe..
Apni Jageh Sab Ban Baithe HaiN ek Se Badh Kar ek Adakaar Dekhna

Tufaano Se Ladte-Ladte Musafir Manzil Tak Pahunch Jaate HaiN
Kuch Haasil Nahi, Kinaaro Pe Baithkar Sirf Majhdaar Dekhna

"Khwahish" Zindagi MeN Har Cheez Ke Do Pehlu Hote HaiN..!!!
Faisla Lene Se Pehle Iss Paar Aur Phir Uss Paar Dekhna



               ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2013, 04:02:23 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshqash.Nice1.
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2013, 04:19:00 PM »
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oomda ghazal behtereeN jazbaat o khayalat ke saa.t,......sab assar aik se badh kar aik haian,..............
bohat bohat c daad khwaish ji,.............
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2013, 04:27:29 PM »
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Bahut achhi baa-maani ashaar se murassa ghazal hai khwaish ji. mubarakbad.
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2013, 04:39:40 PM »
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WOw very nice thoughts & penned beautifully. Hats off..........
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2013, 05:55:27 PM »
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samjah nahi aa rha k kis line ko sabse behtar kahu aur kin alfaazon ki sabse zyada taarif karu....khuch alfaaz zindagi ka sach byaan kar rahe hai toh khuch zindagi ko jeene k dhang pr roshni daal rahe hai...bahut khoob khwaish ji...
sach...bahut khoob..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley........
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2013, 06:02:58 PM »
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Mitti Ke Khilono Se Bhara haiN Duniya Ka Bazaar Dekhna
Sabse Mushkil Hota Hai Kabhi Khud Ko Gunahgaar Dekhna

WAAH WAAH KHWAHISH JI BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE.

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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2013, 06:13:39 PM »
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Chalo Kisi Sehra MeN Ghar Banaate HaiN...!!!!
Ke Bacche Kaapi Pe Jaise Shajar Banaate HaiN
Yeh Zindagi To Akele Guzar Nahi Sakti....!!!
Chalo Kisi Ko Shareek-e-Safar Banaate HaiN

    
     ~~~~Munnawar Raana~~~~~



Mitti Ke Khilono Se Bhara hai Duniya Ka Bazaar Dekhna
Sabse Mushkil Hota Hai Kabhi Khud Ko Gunahgaar Dekhna
sir, there is no connection between the sher
Kuch Buure Log To Hote Hi HaiN Iss Zameen Par Paida..!!
Dharam-Mazhab Se Pehle,Insaniyat Ke Kaun Hain Tarafdaar Dekha

Do Niwaale Kisi Bhooke Ko Khila Do To Ek Sukoon Saa Mile
Iss Duniya MeN Milte HaiN,Dukh-Dard Ke Bhi Kharidaar Dekhna

Kuch Tum Kaho-Kuch Hum Suune,Kuch Hum Kahe-Kuch Tum Sunno
Par Apni Anaa Hi Ban Baith Thi Hai Sabse Badi Deewaar Dekhna
yes sir, you are right. people expect from me to learn their poems but they themself never read or comments on mine because of their ego.

Kisi se Shikwe-ShikayateN HaiN To HaiN, Kaun Suljhaaye Unhe..
Apni Jageh Sab Ban Baithe HaiN ek Se Badh Kar ek Adakaar Dekhna

Tufaano Se Ladte-Ladte Musafir Manzil Tak Pahunch Jaate HaiN
Kuch Haasil Nahi, Kinaaro Pe Baithkar Sirf Majhdaar Dekhna

"Khwahish" Zindagi MeN Har Cheez Ke Do Pehlu Hote HaiN..!!!
Faisla Lene Se Pehle Iss Paar Aur Phir Uss Paar Dekhna



               ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~



nice one,sir
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2013, 06:14:55 PM »
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bahut sunder aur sachhee peshkash
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2013, 06:40:41 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Khwaaish ji,
Bahut umdaa.Khass taur per matla bahut pasand aaya.Dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2013, 06:43:39 PM »
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nice one,sir


"Mitti Ke Khilono Se Bhara Hai Duniya ka Bazaar Dekhna
Sabse Mushkil Hota Hai Khud Ko Gunahgaar Dekhna..

Matla Bilkul Clear Hai Aur issme Connection bhi hai..Iss Sher mein main yeh kehta Hoon..

Duniya Ke Iss Bazaar Mein Hum Sab Mitti Ke Khilono Ki Tarah Hai Aur Insaani Fitrat Ki Baat Karte Hue Aage yeh Kehta Hoon Sabse Mushkil Hota Hai Kisi Insaan Ke Liye Ke Woh kabhi Khud Ko Kabhi Galat Yaa Gunahgaar Samjhe...Agar Aapko Koi conection naa lage to main Muaafi Chaahta Hoon Aapse..

Aur Ek Sher Par Aapne Bahut Badi explanation Di hai ke Aap Sabko padhte Hai Aur Sab Aapse Yeh Expectations Rakhte Hai Ke Aap Unse Kuch Seekhe Par Woh sab Apni Ego ke wajeh se aapse naa kuch seekhte hai naa padhte hai... Baat Badi Ajeeb Hai, par Aapne Kahaa Hai To Zaroor Kuch Aisa Hoga...

Aapne Aapna Waqt diya aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya
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Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshqash.Nice1.

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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2013, 07:40:18 PM »
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 Hats  off to you  Khwaish  ji. outstanding  ,hamesha ki tarah bahut sachai  ae apne  dil ki baatein bayaan  kiya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2013, 07:48:25 PM »
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oomda ghazal behtereeN jazbaat o khayalat ke saa.t,......sab assar aik se badh kar aik haian,..............
bohat bohat c daad khwaish ji,.............


Thanks a Million Laaiba Ji..Thankyou Soooooooo Much icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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bahut bahut khoob khwaishji. bahut hi khoobi ke saath aapne dono pehlu ko samjhaya hai. bahut hi umda peshkash gehre khayalath se saji hai yeh ghazal. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.
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