Umra badhayega kaise........................................PWFS

by pankajwfs on April 24, 2012, 01:49:45 PM
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LamhoN ka hai safar tu tanha bitaeyga kaise
Din beet bhi jaey syaah raat bitaeyga kaise

Nahi jinko sarokaar gham ki dushwariyoN se,
Lutf jeeneY ka bhala shaks wo payega kaise.

Bahut hain falsafe janam sudharne ke yahaaN,
Muhabbat ki touba se khuda ko payega kaise.

Pe ke sagar unki mehfil se tanha hi lout aya,
Raqeeb sochtey rahe ke wo ghar jayega kaise.

Bad-Khayaali hi kaafi dil ko dukhane ke liye,
Bad-jubaaN ho ke koi ristaa nibhayega kaise.

Chalti saasoN pe nahi ikhtiyaar kisika 'pankaj'
Ghut.tee fizaoN me apni umra badhayega kaise.

(PWFS - 24/04/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2012, 01:55:37 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2012, 04:21:43 PM »
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LamhoN ka hai safar tu tanha bitaeyga kaise
Din beet bhi jaey syaah raat bitaeyga kaise

Nahi jinko sarokaar gham ki dushwariyoN se,
Lutf jeeneY ka bhala shaks wo payega kaise.

Bahut hain falsafe janam sudharne ke yahaaN,
Muhabbat ki touba se khuda ko payega kaise.


Pe ke sagar unki mehfil se tanha hi lout aya,
Raqeeb sochtey rahe ke wo ghar jayega kaise.

Bad-Khayaali hi kaafi dil ko dukhane ke liye,
Bad-jubaaN ho ke koi ristaa nibhayega kaise.

Chalti saasoN pe nahi ikhtiyaar kisika 'pankaj'
Ghut.tee fizaoN me apni umra badhayega kaise.

(PWFS - 24/04/2012)


Bahut hi ghazab ka kalam hai Pankaj bhai. Mohabbat ki tauba wala she'r lajawab hai. Khuda aapki likhne ke hunar ko aur nikhare. Aise hi likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2012, 03:48:20 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2012, 10:16:48 AM »
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Pankaj Ji,

Achchhee kavish hai likhte rehiye
hamari shubhkaamnaayen aapke saath
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Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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