Nibaahna chahun bhi to nibaahuN kaise.........PWFS

by pankajwfs on September 13, 2012, 11:14:27 AM
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Nibaahna chahun bhi to nibaahuN kaise,
Sar-e-bazm zakhm-e-dil dikhaauN kaise.

Likhey furkat me Jo itne harf-e-ashna,
Har ik wo mai qaasid ko sunaauN kaise.

Kitna gehra hai ye taqseem ka samandar,
Doobney se isme khud ko bachaauN kaise.

Be-sabab nahi meri in aankhoN me namee,
Mukhtalif haiN gam unko chupaauN kaise.

Dast-e-qaatil me dedi apni Qismat'pankaj',
Qaza se apna daaman mai chudaauN kasie.

(PWFS 13/09/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2012, 11:14:49 AM »
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Nibaahna chahun bhi to nibaahuN kaise,
Sar-e-bazm zakhm-e-dil dikhaauN kaise.

Likhey furkat me Jo itne harf-e-ashna,
Har ik wo mai qaasid ko sunaauN kaise.

Kitna gehra hai ye taqseem ka samandar,
Doobney se isme khud ko bachaauN kaise.

Be-sabab nahi meri in aankhoN me namee,
Mukhtalif haiN gam unko chupaauN kaise.

Dast-e-qaatil me dedi apni Qismat'pankaj',
Qaza se apna daaman mai chudaauN kasie.

(PWFS 13/09/2012)
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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2012, 11:33:45 AM »
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Bahut khoob Pankaj jee
Bahut hi jabardast ghazal pesh kee hai.
Ham to vaise hi aapke kadradaanon me se hai..
Aaj ki ghazal ki bhi jitni taareef kee jaaye kam hai..
Jaane kyo ..yun to sabhee ashaar ek baraabar..kam jyada kahna gustaakhee hogee.
Dil ko choote hue ashaar..Par sabse jyada jisne dil ko chuaa
BESABAB NAHEE MERI IN AANKHON ME NAMEE
MUKHTALIF HAI GAM UNKO CHIPAAUN KAISE… Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2012, 11:35:47 AM »
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BAhut Khub Pankaj Ji Bahut Badiya Mubarak Ho. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2012, 01:05:27 PM »
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Pankaj ji judai ke se dard bhari peshkash aap ki...nice very nice...
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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2012, 01:06:29 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2012, 02:13:29 PM »
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Nibaahna chahun bhi to nibaahuN kaise,
Sar-e-bazm zakhm-e-dil dikhaauN kaise.

Likhey furkat me Jo itne harf-e-ashna,
Har ik wo mai qaasid ko sunaauN kaise.

Kitna gehra hai ye taqseem ka samandar,
Doobney se isme khud ko bachaauN kaise.

Be-sabab nahi meri in aankhoN me namee,
Mukhtalif haiN gam unko chupaauN kaise.

Dast-e-qaatil me dedi apni Qismat'pankaj',
Qaza se apna daaman mai chudaauN kasie.

(PWFS 13/09/2012)



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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2012, 04:58:22 PM »
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NICE , PANKAJ JI.
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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2012, 05:12:05 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob pankaj ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 13, 2012, 06:52:13 PM »
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Kamaal kar diyaa aapne to. Bahoot achchee gazal kahee hai.
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«Reply #10 on: September 13, 2012, 09:06:22 PM »
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Nibaahna chahun bhi to nibaahuN kaise,
Sar-e-bazm zakhm-e-dil dikhaauN kaise.

Likhey furkat me Jo itne harf-e-ashna,
Har ik wo mai qaasid ko sunaauN kaise.

Kitna gehra hai ye taqseem ka samandar,
Doobney se isme khud ko bachaauN kaise.

Be-sabab nahi meri in aankhoN me namee,
Mukhtalif haiN gam unko chupaauN kaise.

Dast-e-qaatil me dedi apni Qismat'pankaj',
Qaza se apna daaman mai chudaauN kasie.

(PWFS 13/09/2012)


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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2012, 08:03:14 AM »
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Hamari shayri hi itihas banaygi is jamanay ki dasha darshaygi
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«Reply #12 on: September 17, 2012, 12:14:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob Pankaj jee
Bahut hi jabardast ghazal pesh kee hai.
Ham to vaise hi aapke kadradaanon me se hai..
Aaj ki ghazal ki bhi jitni taareef kee jaaye kam hai..
Jaane kyo ..yun to sabhee ashaar ek baraabar..kam jyada kahna gustaakhee hogee.
Dil ko choote hue ashaar..Par sabse jyada jisne dil ko chuaa
BESABAB NAHEE MERI IN AANKHON ME NAMEE
MUKHTALIF HAI GAM UNKO CHIPAAUN KAISE… Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut mubaarakbaad

Mukesh ji aapki is zarranawaaji aur qalaam ke baare me itni tafseel se padne aur isey khoobsoort comments dene kel iye tah-e-dil se sukriya ataa karta hoon ... aise hi aap meri haonsalaafzai karte rahien .... hamesa aapka sukrguzaar rahunga ....
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2013, 06:18:53 PM »
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BAhut Khub Pankaj Ji Bahut Badiya Mubarak Ho. Applause Applause
Thank you sanjeev ji..... Bahut dino baad YOindia pe ana hua hai aaj  ap logon ke pyar se marhoom rahe itne din Waqt ki tangi ki wajah se...
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