Uparwale tune bhi.......mann

by mann.mann on August 06, 2014, 04:13:11 PM
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Upar waale tune bhi,
kaisa ye sansar banaya.
Jiski jiske sath nibhe na,
usko uske sath banaya.
Upar wale.....

Phoolon ke sath banaye kante,
bulbul sang saiyad banaya
Majhi ko dee naao magar
sath main hai majhdhar banaya.
Upar wale....

Chahat ke sang dard diya,
sapnon sang sachchayi dee.
Rishte diye wafaon ke aur,
sath main hai vyapaar banaya.
Upar wale....

Din ke sath banayi raaten,
sach ke sath hain jhuthhi baaten,
Honthon par mushkan bhi dee aur,
dard ka bhi ehsas banaya.
Upar wale....

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2014, 06:21:43 PM »
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वाह....

बहुत बहुत बहुत खूब....

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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2014, 07:56:48 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2014, 04:53:58 AM »
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congrats on posting this shandaar nazm.,,,with slight improvement it can also be sung as a song...


just like....
O dunya ke rakhwale
suun dard bhare mere naalay
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2014, 08:15:42 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2014, 09:19:24 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya meetji......

sath rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2014, 11:52:23 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2014, 03:49:06 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2014, 11:07:24 AM »
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bahut shukriya saini sahab....

sath rahiyega.....
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2014, 01:34:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukiya mazharji....
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2014, 11:21:54 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2014, 11:26:36 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2014, 01:11:30 PM »
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shukriya prakrati...
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bahut shukriya kavyanshiji......
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