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Topic: Ye kya hai merre aas paas??? (Read 238 times)

brokenbyluv

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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

« Reply #15 on: February 01, 2010, 06:50:23 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 01, 2010, 06:18:08 PM

Oye bada khoosurat likha hai Geet-di..... Applause

Aasha aur nirasha k beech jhulti hai tu
Aasmaa ko kabhi dharti ko dekhti hai tu

thnx shihab ji n koyal...

Asha hai use paane ki
aur nirasha hai use gawane ki..
mil gye tou jannat hasil ho jayegi..
warna pados mein hai mehfil maikhane ki... (just kidding)


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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

« Reply #16 on: February 03, 2010, 04:41:11 PM »

बहुत खूबसूरत लिखा है गीत जी आपने Applause


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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

« Reply #17 on: February 03, 2010, 06:31:33 PM »

bahut hi acha likha hai aapne Geet ji Applause

aur Shihab ji,Koyal ji aapne bhi Applause

yun hi mahfil jamate rahiye icon_thumleft

aur Geet ji ye last me mazahia shayri Giggle


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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

« Reply #18 on: February 03, 2010, 11:43:11 PM »

Thanks a lot Geet-di.....you liked my lines.....
you have also written very good...... Applause

Wah wah Kya baat hai Geet-di
Masti mai jhoom rahi ho tum

Maiy aur maiykhano ki baat karti ho tum
Miljaayega,tujhe chhod kahaan jaayega wo

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 01, 2010, 06:50:23 PM

thnx shihab ji n koyal...

Asha hai use paane ki
aur nirasha hai use gawane ki..
mil gye tou jannat hasil ho jayegi..
warna pados mein hai mehfil maikhane ki... (just kidding)


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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

« Reply #19 on: February 04, 2010, 08:33:15 PM »

thnx rishi ji...

kaash ji yu hi socha kuch hasa du apne dosto ko hamesha dard bhari shayari hi apke saamne pesh karti hu..khair shukriya ki apko psnd aayi...

koyal ur welcome sweetu...

Masti tou uske pyar ki hai,
jo mujhper nashe ki trh sawar hai,
keh de koi mujhe ki vo sirrf merra hai,
phir tod du main use jo hum dono k beech diwar hai......


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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

« Reply #20 on: February 04, 2010, 11:45:43 PM »

Thanks once again Geet-di.....mujhe sabhashi dene k liye... icon_flower

Main he tujhe bataa du di wo kewal tera hai
Wo jis nashe mai dooba hai wo bhee tera hai

Ab kis deewaar ki Geet tu baat karti hai
Yahi tou tere pyaar-mohabbt ki masti hai

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 04, 2010, 08:33:15 PM


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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

« Reply #21 on: February 05, 2010, 12:04:12 AM »

bahut khoob per kuch change kar k dekhna it can b better..sorry yahan keh rahi hu per i hope it will help u to do better...

Ye aaj terre lafzo mein kaise merra naam aaya,
madhosh se the hum aaj jake hamein kuch hosh aaya,
tu wahi shakhs hai naa merre ajnabi,
jise hamesha merre dil ne hai apni duao mein basaya......