Yun to Saahib..... . . . . . .Jagan Kishan

by Jagan Kishan on April 04, 2012, 03:17:11 PM
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Yun to Saahib hame tanha rehna achha lagta hai
Magar kabhi aap mile to milna achha lagta hai

Dil doz hai jo apni hi daastan jaisi
Us kitaab ke panne palatna achha lagta hai

Zamaane bhar ka ilm be matlab sa hai
Kisi chaak dil ko samajhna achha lagta hai

Kaun chahega hardam yun hosh me hi rehna
Kabhi waqt e shaam bahakna achha lagta hai

Log humWatan bahut gaye pardes magar
Is dil ko inhi galiyo me bhatakna achha lagta hai

Koi jaake keh do paaro se, nashaad nahi main
Ab chandramukhi ka thirakna achha lagta hai
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2012, 03:25:06 PM »
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kalaam hamen bhee jagan aapkaa padhnaa achhaa lagtaa hai
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2012, 03:37:16 PM »
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kya baat hai sainiji...thanx icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2012, 03:38:47 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai.likhte rahye.
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2012, 03:40:07 PM »
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bahut badhiya kishan ji....bahut khoob likha hai aapne....first two lines toh bahut hi khoob rahi....likhte rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2012, 03:49:56 PM »
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Shukriya mere dosto....aap ki kadradani  sar aankho par
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 02:48:08 AM »
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Yun to Saahib hame tanha rehna achha lagta hai
Magar kabhi aap mile to milna achha lagta hai

Dil doz hai jo apni hi daastan jaisi
Us kitaab ke panne palatna achha lagta hai

Zamaane bhar ka ilm be matlab sa hai
Kisi chaak dil ko samajhna achha lagta hai

Kaun chahega hardam yun hosh me hi rehna
Kabhi waqt e shaam bahakna achha lagta hai

Log humWatan bahut gaye pardes magar
Is dil ko inhi galiyo me bhatakna achha lagta hai

Koi jaake keh do paaro se, nashaad nahi main
Ab chandramukhi ka thirakna achha lagta hai
are ham se door hi raho to achcha h.
Aesa na ho ki fir tanhai rulane lage.
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 05:50:10 AM »
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veryyy nice....
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Jagan Kishan
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 06:03:48 AM »
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Thanks Parvana shan and Dollyji
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