Ghazal: baat ChhoTii sii haii maaniYe saahib...!

by DhavalRami on March 31, 2012, 11:41:13 PM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

aap sabhee ko meraa Aadaab aur Namaskaar !!

aik ChhoTii sii koShiSh aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa saath aur pyaar mujhe ees baar bhee milengaa...mulA'iizaa farmaayeN...!

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baat ChhoTii sii haii maaniYe saahib
ik naZar hum ko bhee deKhiYe saahib

dil lagaa baiThe hoN Zindagee se kyuuN
Zindagee Zaalim haii maaniYe saahib

hum pareShaaN dil bhee pareShaaN haii
chup nah baiThe kuChh to boliYe saahib

ko'i kehtaa kuChh ko'ii kaheN kuChh aor
auroN ki baateN sau sochiYe saahib

firte rehte hoN har Sheh'r meiN har dam
Ghar ko rauShan karne lauTiYe saahib

raat tanhaa tanhaa din bhi tanhaa haii
KhuShiyaaN dene ab aa'iYe saahib

Khud ko kar duuN muHabbat meiN QurbaaN
jaaN ki jaaN bhi hai haaZir leejiYe saahib

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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2012, 08:21:37 AM »
Aaye Haaye... Kya Baat Hai Dhaval Bhai.. Kya baat Hai..!!! Is Rachna me Mujhe Dard se kahin Zyada mohabbat Nazar aa rahi hai Bhai... Applause Applause

Behad Umda aur Khubsoorat lafzon se Saji Yeh Rachna dil Loot Le gai.. Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2012, 11:36:10 AM »
bahut laajwaab peshkash dhaval ji badhaai ho aapko
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2012, 11:23:36 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2012, 12:04:53 PM »
awesome....bahut badiya
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2012, 05:03:56 PM »
Dawal Saheb Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai aik ke bad aik kalaam lekar hazir ho raheN
haiN aap... Badi khushi ki baat hai YO ke liye.... Usual Smile


Kafi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne... ahsaas O khayaal behad khoob
rahe... aur adaaygi bhi achchi rahi janab... Usual Smile
Par aisa lag raha hai jaise aapko kafiye kam pad gaye ho apne ahsaas
bayaaN karne ke liye... Usual Smile


Waise sabhi ashaar behad khoob hai... Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2012, 09:13:50 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne Dhaval ji... mazaa aagaya padh ke,.... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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