Ghazal: har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii...!

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

bazm meiN apnii ik ChhoTii sii koShiSh ke saath haaZir ho rahaa huuN... aapki qeemtee raa'ey aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulaa'iizaa famaayeN...!

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har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii
jazbaat-e-bahr dil meiN dabaa hotaa haii

bahr: darya ,samaNdar

kyaa kyaa naa jaane iShq meiN hotaa haii
haal aaShiqoN ka bahot buraa hotaa haii

wo kehte haiiN hum kyaa hai tuMhaare
maiNe kahaa ki tu mi'raa Khudaa hotaa haii

maulaa mere !! yeh iShq bhee kyaa Khuub haii
haNs ke ko_ii kaisey fanaa hotaa haii

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2009, 11:26:26 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji..!!Behtreen Alfaaz likhe hai aapne.!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2009, 11:51:49 AM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

bazm meiN apnii ik ChhoTii sii koShiSh ke saath haaZir ho rahaa huuN... aapki qeemtee raa'ey aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulaa'iizaa famaayeN...!

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har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii
jazbaat-e-bahr dil meiN dabaa hotaa haii

bahr: darya ,samaNdar

kyaa kyaa naa jaane iShq meiN hotaa haii
haal aaShiqoN ka bahot buraa hotaa haii

wo kehte haiiN hum kyaa hai tuMhaare
maiNe kahaa ki tu mi'raa Khudaa hotaa haii

maulaa mere !! yeh iShq bhee kyaa Khuub haii
haNs ke ko_ii kaisey fanaa hotaa haii

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

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KYA BAAT HAI     DAVALRAMI   JI......

HAR SHAKS MEIN IK SHAAYAR CHHIPPA HOTA HAI,
JO LABZ NAHIN KAHE PAATEY,WOH SHABDON SEY KAHETA HAI.

KYA KYA NA JAANE ISHQ MEIN HOTA HAI,
KABHI NAFRAT,TOH KABHI PYAAR HOTA HAI.

WOH KAHETE HAIN HUM KYA HAI TUMHAARE,
HAM KAHETE HAIN,TUM JANNAT HO HAMHAARE.

MAULAA MERE YEH ISHQ BHI KYA KHUB HAI,
JANTAEY HUEY BHI, ISHQ MEIN BARBAAD HOTEY HAI.

JAB YAAD "DAVAL" KO AATI BHEETEN KAL KI,
KABHI DIL HASTA HAIN,TOH KABHI ROTA HAI.
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2009, 12:29:32 PM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

bazm meiN apnii ik ChhoTii sii koShiSh ke saath haaZir ho rahaa huuN... aapki qeemtee raa'ey aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulaa'iizaa famaayeN...!

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har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii
jazbaat-e-bahr dil meiN dabaa hotaa haii

bahr: darya ,samaNdar

kyaa kyaa naa jaane iShq meiN hotaa haii
haal aaShiqoN ka bahot buraa hotaa haii

wo kehte haiiN hum kyaa hai tuMhaare
maiNe kahaa ki tu mi'raa Khudaa hotaa haii

maulaa mere !! yeh iShq bhee kyaa Khuub haii
haNs ke ko_ii kaisey fanaa hotaa haii

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

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bahut achche dhaval saaheb zordaar entry hai aapki yoindia par aate hi deewana bana de aisi ghazal pesh kii hai ....aapke aur kalaam padne ka intzaar rahega

yoon toh har dil zazbaaton se bhara hota hai
khushi main hansta aur gham main rota hai
kabhi jab likh deta hai yeh kaagaz par dard apna
yeh zamana keh k "SHAYAR" oospe fanaa hota hai
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2009, 12:33:52 PM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

bazm meiN apnii ik ChhoTii sii koShiSh ke saath haaZir ho rahaa huuN... aapki qeemtee raa'ey aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulaa'iizaa famaayeN...!

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har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii
jazbaat-e-bahr dil meiN dabaa hotaa haii

bahr: darya ,samaNdar

kyaa kyaa naa jaane iShq meiN hotaa haii
haal aaShiqoN ka bahot buraa hotaa haii

wo kehte haiiN hum kyaa hai tuMhaare
maiNe kahaa ki tu mi'raa Khudaa hotaa haii

maulaa mere !! yeh iShq bhee kyaa Khuub haii
haNs ke ko_ii kaisey fanaa hotaa haii

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2009, 06:47:45 PM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

bazm meiN apnii ik ChhoTii sii koShiSh ke saath haaZir ho rahaa huuN... aapki qeemtee raa'ey aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulaa'iizaa famaayeN...!

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har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii
jazbaat-e-bahr dil meiN dabaa hotaa haii

bahr: darya ,samaNdar

kyaa kyaa naa jaane iShq meiN hotaa haii
haal aaShiqoN ka bahot buraa hotaa haii

wo kehte haiiN hum kyaa hai tuMhaare
maiNe kahaa ki tu mi'raa Khudaa hotaa haii

maulaa mere !! yeh iShq bhee kyaa Khuub haii
haNs ke ko_ii kaisey fanaa hotaa haii

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

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Waah Bahoot BAHOOT KHOOB Daval Ji.. Bahoot hi kamal ki ghazal pesh ki hai..

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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2009, 07:05:01 PM »
Bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji. Very Good.
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2009, 10:41:31 PM »
Dhaval Bhaiiiiii.. Bahut Hi Umda Aur Shaandaar Peshkash hai Dost.. Behad Lajawab Jazzbaaton Ko Kaagaz par Utaara hai Dost..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

aapki Qalam Ke Jaadoo se Hum Pahale Hi Waakif Hain.. Mehfil Me Chaar-Chaand Laga diye hain aapki Is Rachna ne.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob Dost.. Applause Applause

Yunhi likhte rahiye.. Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2009, 10:42:28 PM »
Cara Ji & Saahil Bhai.. aapne Bhi Masha-Allah Bahut Hi Khoob Likha hai.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2009, 10:48:39 PM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

bazm meiN apnii ik ChhoTii sii koShiSh ke saath haaZir ho rahaa huuN... aapki qeemtee raa'ey aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulaa'iizaa famaayeN...!

************************************

har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii
jazbaat-e-bahr dil meiN dabaa hotaa haii

bahr: darya ,samaNdar

kyaa kyaa naa jaane iShq meiN hotaa haii
haal aaShiqoN ka bahot buraa hotaa haii

wo kehte haiiN hum kyaa hai tuMhaare
maiNe kahaa ki tu mi'raa Khudaa hotaa haii

maulaa mere !! yeh iShq bhee kyaa Khuub haii
haNs ke ko_ii kaisey fanaa hotaa haii

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

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her ek line kamal .. magar last line.... Supper dupper dil ko chu gai... bahoot sahi kaha apne Dhaval ji..

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

bahoot sahi farmaya... bahoot he acha likha hai apne.. Good creation!!!

Yoindia mai apka sawagat hai!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2009, 10:50:28 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI     DAVALRAMI   JI......

HAR SHAKS MEIN IK SHAAYAR CHHIPPA HOTA HAI,
JO LABZ NAHIN KAHE PAATEY,WOH SHABDON SEY KAHETA HAI.

KYA KYA NA JAANE ISHQ MEIN HOTA HAI,
KABHI NAFRAT,TOH KABHI PYAAR HOTA HAI.

WOH KAHETE HAIN HUM KYA HAI TUMHAARE,
HAM KAHETE HAIN,TUM JANNAT HO HAMHAARE.

MAULAA MERE YEH ISHQ BHI KYA KHUB HAI,
JANTAEY HUEY BHI, ISHQ MEIN BARBAAD HOTEY HAI.

JAB YAAD "DAVAL" KO AATI BHEETEN KAL KI,
KABHI DIL HASTA HAIN,TOH KABHI ROTA HAI.


bahoot khoob cara ji....

App her ek sath likhati hai... her ek ka sath deti hai.. mujhe apki yah khoobi behad pasand hai... Good lines!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2009, 10:50:56 PM »
bahut achche dhaval saaheb zordaar entry hai aapki yoindia par aate hi deewana bana de aisi ghazal pesh kii hai ....aapke aur kalaam padne ka intzaar rahega

yoon toh har dil zazbaaton se bhara hota hai
khushi main hansta aur gham main rota hai
kabhi jab likh deta hai yeh kaagaz par dard apna
yeh zamana keh k "SHAYAR" oospe fanaa hota hai

bahoot khoob Lil bro!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2009, 11:15:15 PM »
DhavalRami ji apne apni kavita main do bahoot gahre topic ek sath pesh kiye hai...koshish ki hai ki likhi kavita ke anusaar main bhi kuch likh saku...
Apki kavita ki pahli line laker ussi se shuru kar rahi hu...

Her shakas main ek shayar chupa hota hai
Jazbaato ka samunder kahin ander daba hota hai

Waqat per jab rah jaaye tanha insaan dunia main
Kalam ka sath he, sab se achi dawa  (medicine) hota hai

Na bhed koi shabdo se, na armaano per bandh (dam) hota hai
Insaan aor ander ke shayar ka tab sucha sath hota hai

Ishaq per kaya likhe Pooja,  shabdo mai bhi wo arth kaha
Bayan kar sake jo dil ka dard, dard to bas sirf dard hota hai
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2009, 10:32:38 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji..!!Behtreen Alfaaz likhe hai aapne.!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.



Shaily jee:

namaste!

merii adnaa sii koShiSh ko aapne apnaa waQt diyaa.. be-Had KhuShii hu'ii.. yuuNhi paRhte rahiYeNgaa aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

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«Reply #14 on: August 13, 2009, 10:40:57 AM »
KYA BAAT HAI     DAVALRAMI   JI......

HAR SHAKS MEIN IK SHAAYAR CHHIPPA HOTA HAI,
JO LABZ NAHIN KAHE PAATEY,WOH SHABDON SEY KAHETA HAI.

KYA KYA NA JAANE ISHQ MEIN HOTA HAI,
KABHI NAFRAT,TOH KABHI PYAAR HOTA HAI.

WOH KAHETE HAIN HUM KYA HAI TUMHAARE,
HAM KAHETE HAIN,TUM JANNAT HO HAMHAARE.

MAULAA MERE YEH ISHQ BHI KYA KHUB HAI,
JANTAEY HUEY BHI, ISHQ MEIN BARBAAD HOTEY HAI.

JAB YAAD "DAVAL" KO AATI BHEETEN KAL KI,
KABHI DIL HASTA HAIN,TOH KABHI ROTA HAI.

Cara jee:

namaste!

kaisi hai.n aap?

sab se pehle tou Ghazal ki pazeerA'ii ke liye maiN aapka mamnuun huuN!  aapne merii Ghazal ke saath jo apne ehsaas joReN hai.n bahot hi laa-jawaab rahe.n.. Khaas t'aur par aapne pehla Sher jo arz kiyaa haii uss Sher kaa jo dusraa miSraa

JO LABZ NAHIN KAHE PAATEY,WOH SHABDON SEY KAHETA HAI.!

bahot hi saHeeH farmaayaa hai aapne ees miSre meiN kii ik Shaayar wo baat keh jaataa apnii Shaa'iiree ke zar'iiYe jo lafz Shaayad kabhee zubaaN se nah nikal paayeN! .. bahot hi Khuub kahaa hay aapne! aapki soch bahot pasaNd aayiiN!

ShuKriyaa'h!

yuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval



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