Ghazal: Bewafaa'ii kaa zamaanaa haii wafaa kyuuN karte hoN...!

by DhavalRami on March 25, 2012, 07:37:51 AM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

namaskaar aur Aadaab!

aik koShiSh bazm mein peSh kar rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab ko pasand aayengii... mulA'iizaa farmaayeN
 
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Bewafaa'ii kaa zamaanaa haii wafaa kyuuN karte hoN
zaKhm Khaate hii raho yaaroN dawaa kyuuN karte hoN

teri kismat meiN nahiiN thaa pyaar kaa rangeeN mausam
fir bhi baateN pyaar ki har waQt bhalaa kyuuN karte hoN

haaN ye aadat haii baDii zaalim jo tujh ko lag gayi haii
log to kehte rahenge sab sunaa kyuuN karte hoN

aik se nahi bewafaa'ii kar tuu hazaaroN se aiisii
baat baDi seedhii si haii samjho manaa kyuuN karte hoN

Shaam Dhalte hii parinde aayenge Ghar meiN apne
Ghar kahe subHa ke hone par uDaa kyuuN karte hoN

Qaafiyaa matlaa-o-maQtaa beH'r aur radeef hai kyaa?
dil ki baateN liKh do auroN ki sunaa kyuuN karte hoN


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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2012, 07:51:28 AM »
bahut khoob dhawal ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2012, 07:59:53 AM »
Bht Khoob Aur Lajawaab Likha Hai Aap Ne Dhaval Ji.. Applause Applause Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2012, 08:17:22 AM »
Bahut Khub..!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2012, 08:41:03 AM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

namaskaar aur Aadaab!

aik koShiSh bazm mein peSh kar rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab ko pasand aayengii... mulA'iizaa farmaayeN
 
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Bewafaa'ii kaa zamaanaa haii wafaa kyuuN karte hoN
zaKhm Khaate hii raho yaaroN dawaa kyuuN karte hoN
 matla acha hai. per paigham ghalat hai[/b] Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
teri kismat meiN nahiiN thaa pyaar kaa rangeeN mausam
fir bhi baateN pyaar ki har waQt bhalaa kyuuN karte hoN
isme buraai kya hai. Embarrased Embarrased
haaN ye aadat haii baDii zaalim jo tujh ko lag gayi haii
log to kehte rahenge sab sunaa kyuuN karte hoN
ye sahi baat hai kaan ka kachcha nahin hona chahiye[/color] Applause Applause Applause
aik se nahi bewafaa'ii kar tuu hazaaroN se aiisii
baat baDi seedhii si haii samjho manaa kyuuN karte hoN
 icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratchnahin samajh aayi baat

Shaam Dhalte hii parinde aayenge Ghar meiN apne
Ghar kahe subHa ke hone par uDaa kyuuN karte hoN
rozi-roti ka sawaal hai dost[/b] Usual Smile
Qaafiyaa matlaa-o-maQtaa beH'r aur radeef hai kyaa?
dil ki baateN liKh do auroN ki sunaa kyuuN karte hoN
ghazal to phir aise hi likhi jaati hai. hum chahe is baat ko maane ya na maane.
 likhne ke apne adaab hain.radd-o-badal ki gunjaaish nahin [
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2012, 09:38:04 AM »
Dhaval Saheb Aadaab!

Welcome back janab...
Behad achchi kalaam lekar aaye hai... sabhi ahsaas o
khayaal behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Aik khoobsurat kalaam par dili daad o mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye... Usual Smile
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2012, 04:35:16 PM »

Dhaval Mere Bhaiiiiiiiiii.... Jab Bhi aate ho Dhamaake ke Saath aate Ho... Dil Ko Chhoo Gai Yaaar aapki Yeh Nazm.... ek ek lafz Such likha hai aapne.. Waqai Bewafaai Ka Zamaana Hai.. Aur yeh aaj ka subse Bada Such Hai.. !!

Aakhiri Jumla to Bas jaise jaan Hi Le gaya.. Kamaal Ka likha hai Bhai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2012, 06:20:32 PM »
waah janaab--
aisi ghazal parhne ko mile to il gaddgadd ho jata hai--
bht bht daad Dhaval sahab

aate rahie
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2012, 05:42:24 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Dhaval ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2012, 04:28:27 PM »
Bahut umda ehsaas-o-khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne.
Applause Applause
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