Ghazal: ZiNdagee meree mujh se kyuuN Khafaa ho ga'ii...!

by DhavalRami on March 09, 2010, 12:32:21 PM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:
Namaskaar aur Aadaab!
bazm meiN aik baar fir se haaZir huuN apni nayii koShiSh ko liye..ummid kartaa huuN aapko yeh ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge...
aapkaa pyaar aur saath haMeShaa ki taraH Zaruur mile.Ngaa.. mulA'iizaa farmaayeN..!

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saaraa jahaaN mil gayaa mujhe, bas ik terii hi to kami rahiiN.. ey zaalim ! ab to bataa de mujh ko , judaa hone ki aaKhir  wo kyaa wajH rahiiN
ke tujh se hi to din the mere KhuShnumaa... tujh se hi to thee meree har Shab rauShan.. merii har saaNsoN meiN tu samaayaa thaa..
tujh ko hi to dil ne mere apnaa banaayaa thaa... yaad kar tune hi to mujh ko jeenaa seeKhaayaa thaa
haaN !!   mujh ko jeenaa seeKhayaa thaa..!


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ZiNdagee meree mujh se kyuuN Khafaa ho ga'ii
kyaa kahiiN mujh se ko'i baDii Khataa ho ga'ii

waj'H kyaa thee ke tu hum se be-wafaa ho ga'ii
saare baNdhan toD ke kyuuN judaa ho ga'ii

muskuraa le mere Ghum pe tu bhee ey sanam!
zaKhm dene ki ti'ree ye ik adaa ho ga'ii

kaise jee paauuNgaa tere binaa ab yahaaN
har KhuShii tujh se thii ziNdagee sazaa ho ga'ii

Khud hi ko bhoolaa baiThaa tha ti'ree chaah meiN
ziNdagee dheere se meree fanaa ho ga'ii

naa gilaa tujh se naa  ko'ii Shikaayat mi'ree
waQt marham yaaroN ki duaa dawaa ho ga'ii


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«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2010, 12:50:31 PM »
Excellent Poetry!!!!

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Bahut bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal!!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2010, 05:32:54 PM »
Excellent Poetry!!!!

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KhwaahiSh jee:

Aadaab!

Ghazal kii pazeerA'ii ke liye maiN aapka be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN.. aise hi saath dete rahiyeNgaa aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


Bahut bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal!!!

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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2010, 05:48:07 PM »
Waah Waah Dhaval ji.. bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda likha hai.. Lajawaab !
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2010, 10:20:42 PM »
Amazingggggggg Dhaval Bhai.. Baar Baar Padhi Maine aapki Yeh Gazal.. Kya Kahun Bhai.. Alfaaz Nahi Mere Paas iski Taareef ke Liye..!! Har Sher Har Lafz Apne aap Me Behad Khubsoorat Hai..!!  icon_thumleft

Behad Touching aur Ehasaaason Se Bhari Yeh Gazal Kaagaz Par Utaari hai aapne..!!  notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2010, 07:02:53 AM »
Mindblowing and very touching gazal ,Dhaval ji bahut pasand aayi aapke gazal.great creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2010, 04:26:04 PM »
Bahut Pasand Aaye Aapke Ehsas
Waqaiy Mein Bahut Pyari Ghazal Hai.

Bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji...
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2010, 10:40:03 AM »
Waah Waah Dhaval ji.. bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda likha hai.. Lajawaab !

sophi jee:

namaste!

paRhne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaaH.. saath dete raheN aag bhee!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2010, 10:59:18 AM »
Bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai Dhawal sahab. Alfaaz ka badi khoobsurti imstemaal kiya aur dard ko bakhubi numayan kiya hai. Sabhi ashaar achhe hain, mujhe sabse achha ye sher laga:

kaise jee paauuNgaa tere binaa ab yahaaN
har KhuShii tujh se thii ziNdagee sazaa ho ga
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2010, 06:47:35 PM »
EXCELLENT,    MARVELLOUS
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