Ghazal: ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee...!

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. mere zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2009, 05:19:05 PM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. mere zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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KYA BAAT HAI   DHAVAL JI......

JISNE SAMJHA HAI ZINDAGI KO
BAHETAR USKI HAI ZINDAGI
HAR KADAM KO JO SOCHE SAMJHE
SAMJHA USNE HAI ZINDAGI

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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2009, 05:21:23 PM »
Dhaval Ji Jab Bhi Aate Ho Kuch Naya Lekar Aate Ho
Lekin Jo bhi likhte Hai aap bahut hi sundar Likhte ho
mujhe Aapki ye rachana bahut hi pasand aai dua krta hu
aap isi tarah likhte rhe aur yuhi humesha muskarate rhe
Nice and excellent Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2009, 08:39:05 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Dhaval ji,dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita,zindagi mein kiya kiya hota hai aapne toh sab kuch likh diya.lovely thoughts,mindblowing creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2009, 02:20:54 PM »
Dhaval Bhai Ko Is Dost ka Salaam... Usual Smile

Dhaval Mere Bhai.. Bahut Hi umda Alfaaz Yahan Likhe Hain aapne Humesha Ki Tarah.. Dil Ke Jazzbaaton Ko, Dard Ko Kaagaz Par Behad Khubsoorati ke sath Sajaaya hai aapne..!! Bahut Hi Behtreen Peshkash... Applause Applause



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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2010, 11:18:25 AM »
Bhai Dhawal Aadab Umeed Karta Hun Aap Thik Honge.
Aur Kya Kahun Bhai Zindagi Ki Jaddo Jehad Se Bhara
Aapka Yeh Kalaam Hume Behat Pasand Aaya Bahut Umda Bhai
Bahut Hi Pyaare Ehsas Hai Aapke Good Job
Dil Se Likhe Is Kalaam Ko Dil Se Da'd Hazir Hai Kabul Karen

Aur Umeed Karta Hun Aage Bhi Aap Yun Hi Mehfil Ki Ronak Barate
Rahenge...Aur Hume Yun Hi Nayi Baatein Sikhne Ko Milti Rahengi


Aur Waise To Har Line Apne Mein Kuch Khash Hai
Par Ye Lines To Aapne Bas Kamaal Ki Likhdi Hai
Sidha Dil Mein Utar Gayi Hai...Keep It Up.

Khush Rahe Duao,n Ke SaathIjazat Chaunga
Take Care



Shihab bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

ummid kartaa huuN aap Khairiyat se hoNge .. Ghazal ki pazeerA'ii ke liye maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN.. itnaa apnaapan aur saath  milaa dil ko be-Had KhuShnuudee hu'ii.. saath nibhaate raheN ees safar meiN aage bhee

ShuKriyaa'h

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKeN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2010, 11:28:28 AM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. mere zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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Waaah Waah Waah Waah . Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dhaval Ji.. SubanAllah Kya khoob Likha hai... !
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2010, 11:55:49 PM »
Majid brother and Dhawal ji... Bahut bahut umda peshkash  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2010, 12:01:41 AM »
Dhaval Sahab is ghazal ki khoobsurati bayan karne ke liya main kya kahun siwa iske ke ye ghazal apne aap mein ek unique ghazal hai. Har tarah se mukammal aur bamaani. Aaj hi is par nazar padi aur main padhta hi reh gaya,sochta hi rah gaha. Kisi shayar ka ek sher yaad aata hai:

Zindagi kya hai ek safar ke siwa
Ek dushwaar  rehguzar ke siwa
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2010, 11:35:49 AM »
Dhaval Bhai ALHUMDULILAH Hum Bilkul Thik Hain
Aap Sunaaye..!
Aur Bhai Aapko Is Qadar Mamnun Hone Ki Jarurat Nahi
Humne Aap Par Koi Ehsan Nahi Kiya Hai
Bas Aapne Likha Hi Itna Pyaara Hai Ki Kya Kahun
Bas Aapke Alfazon Mein Ajib Sa Khulus Hai Jo
Hume Yahaan Khinch Laaya...Khair
Aage Bhi Umeed Karta Hun Ki Hume Aur Bhi
Aapke Pyaar Kalaam Parhne Ko Milenge...!

Duao,n K Saath Ijazat Chaunga...

Khush Rahiye Shihab..


Shihab bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

yeh meri KhuShkismatee hay kii aap mujhe itani izzat dete hoN! Khudaa se duaa yahee hai kii yeh saath yuuNhi banaa raheN! paRhte rahen aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN.. duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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