Zindgi Simat Gai

by drpandey on February 07, 2010, 02:49:49 AM
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Pairahan mein khwab ke zindgi simat gai,
Dekhte hi dekhte maut se lipat gai.
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Ab koi gila nahin gham nahin sitam nahin,
Dekhne ke vaaste ab koi bharam nahin,
Ek faqeer kah gaya aaj mujhse raah mein,
Ab wazOd aa gaya hai wakt ki panah mein,
RotiyoN ki aas mein ek nigaah thak gai,
Pairhan mein khwab ke zindgi simat gai!

Fir koi thahar gaya bhookh aur pyas se,
Koi saans tham gai bin dava ilaaj ke,
Rooh fir tadap gai aatishi mizaj se,
Puchhta hai kaun yahaN aadmi ka haal kya,
Baaji apni ban gai aur gair ki palat gai,
Pairahan mein khwab ke zindgi simat gai!
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Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2010, 09:56:33 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Pandey Ji Aapne Padhkar Mann Pulkit Ho Gya
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2010, 12:13:13 AM »
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bahut khoob
bahut dil laga ke likha hai aapne Pandey ji
bahut ache ehsaas kalam ko bakshen, Applause Applause Applause Applause
yun hi likhte rahiye
Dhanybaad @Kaash ji aapki himmatafzai milti rahi to koshish karta rahunga
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 12:19:27 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Pandey Ji Aapne Padhkar Mann Pulkit Ho Gya
Rishi bhai agar aapki duvayen milti rahin to aapko pulkit karne ki koshish karta rahunga.Bahut bahut dhanybaad
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 02:41:40 PM »
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Wah wah Pandey sahab kya hi khoobsurat nazm likhi hai aapne. Aapke paas to lagta hai ek se badhkar ek rachnayen hain jo dheere dheere nikal kar awaam ke beech aa rahi hain.
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 03:20:33 PM »
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Wah wah Pandey sahab kya hi khoobsurat nazm likhi hai aapne. Aapke paas to lagta hai ek se badhkar ek rachnayen hain jo dheere dheere nikal kar awaam ke beech aa rahi hain.

Riyaj Sahab azhad sukriya ki aapko nazm pasand aai, vaastav mein jab Science ki pechidgi rooh ko thaka deti hai aur sochta hun ki ye kya ho raha hai? to thought se kuchh alfaaz nikal kar aa jate hain unheN hi likh leta hun, Vo kya hote hain mujhe maloom nahin. Aap logoN ki posts padhkar kuchh sikhne ki koshish karta rahta hun.
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2010, 01:02:28 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Pandey ji.really touching,great creation.
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2010, 03:43:23 AM »
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Pairahan mein khwab ke zindgi simat gai,
Dekhte hi dekhte maut se lipat gai.
===========================
Ab koi gila nahin gham nahin sitam nahin,
Dekhne ke vaaste ab koi bharam nahin,
Ek faqeer kah gaya aaj mujhse raah mein,
Ab wazOd aa gaya hai wakt ki panah mein,
RotiyoN ki aas mein ek nigaah thak gai,
Pairhan mein khwab ke zindgi simat gai!

Fir koi thahar gaya bhookh aur pyas se,
Koi saans tham gai bin dava ilaaj ke,
Rooh fir tadap gai aatishi mizaj se,
Puchhta hai kaun yahaN aadmi ka haal kya,
Baaji apni ban gai aur gair ki palat gai,
Pairahan mein khwab ke zindgi simat gai!
============================
Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
 




Very nice creation Dr. Pandey
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