आग लगती है/Aag lagtee hai............................SAINI

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नयन से धार जब जल की बहे तो आग लगती है |

कोई जब  दास्ताँ ग़म की कहे तो आग लगती है ||

सितम सहने की भी आख़िर कोई सीमा तो होती है |

ज़रुरत  से  ज़ियादा  गर सहे तो आग लगती है ||
 

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Nayan se dhaar  jab  jal kee bahe to aag lagtee hai.
Koi jab daastaaN gham kee  kahe  to aag  lagtee hai.
Sitam sahne kee bhee aakhir koi seemaa to hotee hai.
Zaroorat se  ziyaadaa  gar  sahe to aag lagtee hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2012, 05:30:45 AM »
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डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
 

Nayan se dhaar  jab  jal kee bahe to aag lagtee hai.
Koi jab daastaaN gham kee  kahe  to aag  lagtee hai.
Sitam sahne kee bhee aakhir koi seemaa to hotee hai.
Zaroorat se  ziyaadaa  ghar  sahe to aag lagtee hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini


ANKHON K SAMNE KOI , KISI SE KHILWAD KAR JAYE
OR LOG SIRF TAMANSHEE BAN JAYEN ...TO AAG LAGTI HAI.....

boht umdaa saini sir.. boht khub

apki kalam padke apne par afsos hota hai k mai ek rau bhi ni de sakta...
apki har shayri par 100 rau kurban happy9
boht khoob likha sir boht khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2012, 08:08:09 AM »
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नयन से धार जब जल की बहे तो आग लगती है |

कोई जब  दास्ताँ ग़म की कहे तो आग लगती है ||

सितम सहने की भी आख़िर कोई सीमा तो होती है |

ज़रुरत  से  ज़ियादा  ग़र सहे तो आग लगती है ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
 

Nayan se dhaar  jab  jal kee bahe to aag lagtee hai.
Koi jab daastaaN gham kee  kahe  to aag  lagtee hai.
Sitam sahne kee bhee aakhir koi seemaa to hotee hai.
Zaroorat se  ziyaadaa  ghar  sahe to aag lagtee hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini


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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2012, 08:26:31 AM »
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ANKHON K SAMNE KOI , KISI SE KHILWAD KAR JAYE
OR LOG SIRF TAMANSHEE BAN JAYEN ...TO AAG LAGTI HAI.....

boht umdaa saini sir.. boht khub

apki kalam padke apne par afsos hota hai k mai ek rau bhi ni de sakta...
apki har shayri par 100 rau kurban happy9
boht khoob likha sir boht khoob
sainee sir bahut khoob likha hai badhai
roy ji, aapki line bhi achhi hain, jald hi aap bhi rau dene ke kabil ho jayenge bas aapki post 100 ka ankda par kar jaye jara uske baad aap rau ke shatak bhi bana sakte hain
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2012, 08:47:41 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SIR
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2012, 09:07:26 AM »
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Bahut hi umda Saini Jee. Ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2012, 09:21:00 AM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob ....
Bade hi gehre aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal pesh kiye haiN aapne...
Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob.... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2012, 10:22:55 AM »
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नयन से धार जब जल की बहे तो आग लगती है |

कोई जब  दास्ताँ ग़म की कहे तो आग लगती है ||

सितम सहने की भी आख़िर कोई सीमा तो होती है |

ज़रुरत  से  ज़ियादा  ग़र सहे तो आग लगती है ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
 

Nayan se dhaar  jab  jal kee bahe to aag lagtee hai.
Koi jab daastaaN gham kee  kahe  to aag  lagtee hai.
Sitam sahne kee bhee aakhir koi seemaa to hotee hai.
Zaroorat se  ziyaadaa  ghar  sahe to aag lagtee hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini

bahut khub sir bahut khub beautyful
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2012, 10:55:05 AM »
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baht khoob Saini sahab
leki last line ka mtlb nhi smjha
"
jarurat se jada !ghar! sahe to aag lgti h
"
ghar se kya matlb hai aapka

Nayan se dhaar  jab  jal kee bahe to aag lagtee hai.
Koi jab daastaaN gham kee  kahe  to aag  lagtee hai.
Sitam sahne kee bhee aakhir koi seemaa to hotee hai.
Zaroorat se  ziyaadaa  ghar  sahe to aag lagtee hai ]
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urdu men agar yaa gar ek hee baat hai jiskaa matlab hai yadi
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wah bahut khoob sir ek rau aapka banta hai
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thanq lekin GAR shabd ka mtlb janta tha mai--
yhan GHAR dekha islie pucha qki dout tha ki GAR hi likha hoga aapne--
ab sab clear ho gaya-- Usual Smile

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob Saini ji.....!!!
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