डूब जाता हूँ मैं/Doob jaataa hooN maiN...........................SAINI

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एक ही घूँट में डूब  जाता   हूँ    मैं |

फिर भी सागर से बाज़ी लगाता हूँ  मैं ||
 

भूख से  मेरे  बच्चे    मरे  तो  मरे |

रोज़ बारूद  ढेरों  जुटाता    हूँ   मैं ||
 

ख़ुद भी जल  जाऊंगा  जानता हूँ मगर |

फिर भी घर दूसरों के जलाता  हूँ  मैं ||
 

एसा अक्ल-ओ-ख़िरद का दिवाला पिटा |

गिरती दीवार में दर बनाता   हूँ  मैं ||
 

मेरे  अन्दर  भरी कितनी मक्कारियां |

मुस्कुरा कर उन्हें बस छुपाता हूँ मैं ||
 

बात आदिल भला कैसे  समझे सही |

देखता हूँ मैं कुछ,कुछ बताता हूँ मैं ||
 

सामने डाल दे जो भी  टुकड़ा  मेरे |

सामने उसके ही दुम हिलाता हूँ मैं ||
 

मुझसे बातें हया की किया मत करो |

बेहयाई  हमेशा  दिखाता   हूँ  मैं ||
 

बाज़  फ़ितरत से‘सैनी’मैं आता नहीं |

बारहा कुछ न कुछ चोट खाता हूँ मैं ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी      

     
Ek  hee   ghoont    meN   doob  jaataa hooN maiN.
Fir    bhee  saagar se baazee lagaataa hooN maiN.

Bhookh    se   mere   bachhe    mare   to   mare.
Roz    baarood   dheroN    jutaataa   hooN  maiN.

Khud   bhee   jal   jaaoongaa jaantaa hooN magar.
Fir   bhee   ghar  doosroN ke jalaataa hooN maiN.

Esaa    aql-o-khirad    kaa     diwaalaa   pitaa.
Girtee   deewaar   meN   dar  banaataa hooN maiN.

Mere   andar   bharee   kitnee      makkaariyaaN.
Muskuraa   kar   unhe  bas  chhupaataa hooN maiN.

Baat    aadil   bhalaa  kaise   samjhe     sahee.
Dekhtaa hooN maiN kuchh,kuchh bataataa hooN maiN.

Saamne   daal    de  jo    bhee   tukdaa    mere.
Saamne   uske   hee    dum   hilaataa  hooN maiN.

Mujhse   baateN   hayaa   kee   kiyaa   mat karo.
Behyaayee   hameshaa    dikhaataa   hooN    maiN.

Baaz  fitrat  se    ‘saini’  maiN  aataa  naheeN.
Baarahaa  kuchh  n  kuchh chot khaataa hooN maiN.

Dr.Surendra Saini      
     
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2012, 06:16:04 AM »
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bahut khoob Saini Ji, bahut badiya jajbaat hain aur unhee jajbaat ke liye ek rau aapki nazar kar raha hoon, sweekaar kijiye
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BAHUT KHOOB SIR.
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2012, 08:10:57 AM »
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एक ही घूँट में डूब  जाता   हूँ    मैं |

फिर भी सागर से बाज़ी लगाता हूँ  मैं ||
 

भूख से  मेरे  बच्चे    मरे  तो  मरे |

रोज़ बारूद  ढेरों  जुटाता    हूँ   मैं ||
 

ख़ुद भी जल  जाऊंगा  जानता हूँ मगर |

फिर भी घर दूसरों के जलाता  हूँ  मैं ||
 

एसा अक्ल-ओ-ख़िरद का दिवाला पिटा |

गिरती दीवार में दर बनाता   हूँ  मैं ||
 

मेरे  अन्दर  भरी कितनी मक्कारियां |

मुस्कुरा कर उन्हें बस छुपाता हूँ मैं ||
 

बात आदिल भला कैसे  समझे सही |haan bhai judge ko to gumraah kar sakte hai. per khudaa ko nahin

देखता हूँ मैं कुछ,कुछ बताता हूँ मैं ||
 

सामने डाल दे जो भी  टुकड़ा  मेरे |

सामने उसके ही दुम हिलाता हूँ मैं ||
 

मुझसे बातें हया की किया मत करो |

बेहयाई  हमेशा  दिखाता   हूँ  मैं ||
 

बाज़  फ़ितरत से‘सैनी’मैं आता नहीं |

बारहा कुछ न कुछ चोट खाता हूँ मैं ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी      

    
Ek  hee   ghoont    meN   doob  jaataa hooN maiN.
Fir    bhee  saagar se baazee lagaataa hooN maiN.

Bhookh    se   mere   bachhe    mare   to   mare.
Roz    baarood   dheroN    jutaataa   hooN  maiN.

Khud   bhee   jal   jaaoongaa jaantaa hooN magar.
Fir   bhee   ghar  doosroN ke jalaataa hooN maiN.

Esaa    aql-o-khirad    kaa     diwaalaa   pitaa.
Girtee   deewaar   meN   dar  banaataa hooN maiN.

Mere   andar   bharee   kitnee      makkaariyaaN.
Muskuraa   kar   unhe  bas  chhupaataa hooN maiN.

Baat    aadil   bhalaa  kaise   samjhe     sahee.
Dekhtaa hooN maiN kuchh,kuchh bataataa hooN maiN.

Saamne   daal    de  jo    bhee   tukdaa    mere.
Saamne   uske   hee    dum   hilaataa  hooN maiN.

Mujhse   baateN   hayaa   kee   kiyaa   mat karo.
Behyaayee   hameshaa    dikhaataa   hooN    maiN.

Baaz  fitrat  se    ‘saini’  maiN  aataa  naheeN.
Baarahaa  kuchh  n  kuchh chot khaataa hooN maiN.

Dr.Surendra Saini      
    



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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2012, 08:38:17 AM »
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Waah waah Saini Jee bahut khoob. Dheron daad aur ek Rau.
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good creation sir
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booht he umdaa saini sir..... booht likha hai ..

jo stirs maren hai vo lajwab hai sir !!

lakhon daad !!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2012, 02:23:56 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Saini ji....!!!
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Waah  Dr . sahab . Meri  dil  se daad  hazir  hai . 
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kaabil-e-taarif hai Sir.Ek rau to zaroor banta hai
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saini mujhe nahi lagta koi bhi is rachna kisahi dhung se tareef kar payega.....yeh bahut hi umda khyalo se upji hai.......aur saini sir ek baat jarur kahenge aisi rachna padhne ke baad kuch aur padho to wo kam hi lagta hai ......aisa sirf mujhe lagta hai... aap kahte hai jaise aap hamari tareef karte hai waise hi agar humein aapki nazm/gazal pasand aaye to hum bhi karein... par aapki rachna padhte hai  kuch sujhta hi nahi ki kya shabd kahein aur kaise kahein...

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Bahut k hoob  bhai  Saini  saheb . Aaj naaghe ke liye muafi ke sath 1 rau hazir hai .
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