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Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O tasleem!
Kai dino se kuch likh nahi paa raheN hai so soche ke apni koi
purani kalaam hi post kar deN....
Lijiye yeH kalaam aap sabki nazar......
Hum Sitaare Ko nishaaN banaye baithe hai
Dil ki hasrat ko hum JaaN banaye baithe hai
Ye dil besabra hai jawaab -e- talab unke
Woh khamoshi ko zubaaN banaye baithe hai
Dard -e- diL per DawaaoN ka asar hota nahiN
Dil yeh bimar KhamakhaaN banaye baithe hai
Humne chahaa mohobbat mein khuda dekheN
Log hai daulat pe iimaaN banaye baithe hai
Din ko Chain nahi raatoN ko khayaal unke
Aur woh izhaar ko ahsaaN banaye baithe hai
Ek Zarra Si baat per huye hai itne khafaa
Besabab hi dil bad-gumaaN banaye baithe hai
Woh shikwe shikayateN woh jafa kii baateN
Itne faasle darmiyaaN banaye baithe hai
Kis qadar chur hai nashe mein sab jahaaNwale
Khud ko khud se anjaaN banaye baithe hai
ParwaaZ manzil hai samne chand kadmoN par
Laut jaane ka kyuN armaaN banaye baithe hai
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Gyan Prakash
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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2011, 06:35:53 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2011, 02:40:30 AM » |
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bahot achi post Mahamahim-- thanx ki aapne apni ye kalaam humare saath share kia--  be happy always haste rahiye |
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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2011, 03:31:24 AM » |
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waaah--
aaj ka din acha hai Parwaaz ji.
aapka likha kalaam padhne ko mil gaya jo bht hi muskil se milta hai yo par.
bahut khoob khayal kahe hain aapne--
mind blowing ji.
khus rahiye
aabaad rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2011, 03:57:27 AM » |
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Parwaaz saheb, bahut khushi hui aap ka kalaam parh kar.Khoobsurat peshkash.Her sher umda.Khaas taur se ye sher bahut paand aaya :
'woh shikwe shikayaten wo jafa ki baatein
itne faasle darmyaan banaaye baihhe hain'
Guzarish hai ki aap aayenda bhi apni khoobsurat takhleeqaat,nai ya puraani, yoindia per share karte raheine.Kair andesh HASAN
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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2011, 10:38:27 PM » |
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G P jee Aadaab!
Thanks for this nice appriciation...
Keep reading...
Keep Visiting...
Khuda Hafez
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2011, 11:10:18 PM » |
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bahot achi post Mahamahim-- thanx ki aapne apni ye kalaam humare saath share kia-- be happy always haste rahiye
Shukriyaa Janab.. aapko yeh kalaam pasand aayi aur
aapne houNsla afzai ki...
Aage bhi saath banaaye rakhiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez ...
Has to luN par muskurahat kahaaN se lauN
Bhul gaya jo maiN woH aadat kahaaN se lauN
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2011, 03:07:55 AM » |
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Parwaaz bhai Aadaab
Bahut bahut shukriya is sharing ke liye.
Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2011, 12:25:27 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: September 17, 2011, 07:56:24 AM » |
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Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O tasleem!
Kai dino se kuch likh nahi paa raheN hai so soche ke apni koi
purani kalaam hi post kar deN....
Lijiye yeH kalaam aap sabki nazar......
Hum Sitaare Ko nishaaN banaye baithe hai
Dil ki hasrat ko hum JaaN banaye baithe hai
Ye dil besabra hai jawaab -e- talab unke
Woh khamoshi ko zubaaN banaye baithe hai
Dard -e- diL per DawaaoN ka asar hota nahiN
Dil yeh bimar KhamakhaaN banaye baithe hai
Humne chahaa mohobbat mein khuda dekheN
Log hai daulat pe iimaaN banaye baithe hai
Din ko Chain nahi raatoN ko khayaal unke
Aur woh izhaar ko ahsaaN banaye baithe hai
Ek Zarra Si baat per huye hai itne khafaa
Besabab hi dil bad-gumaaN banaye baithe hai
Woh shikwe shikayateN woh jafa kii baateN
Itne faasle darmiyaaN banaye baithe hai
Kis qadar chur hai nashe mein sab jahaaNwale
Khud ko khud se anjaaN banaye baithe hai
ParwaaZ manzil hai samne chand kadmoN par
Laut jaane ka kyuN armaaN banaye baithe hai
wah ji huzur ek behtrin kalaam pesh kiya.daad daad daad |
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on eTI community..
