kahte hain darakht suno mahka mahka sama

by @kaash on January 16, 2010, 08:27:09 PM
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jhoomti hui hawa ya madhham madham saba
kahte hain darakht suno mahka mahka sama

kudrat kya kahti hai kaise kahti hai kyun kahti hai
ye to uparvale ki awaaz hai jo hamesha kayam rahti hai


ye ek sada hai jo har dil me palti hai
ye ek ada hai jo har dil ki sunti hai


kahin nadi ka kal kal pani to kahin dhandhi meethi pawan
kahin sunhari shaam ka manzar aaftab ka mamnoon andaaz



kahin pahadon ke beech gaanv koi to kahin gaanvon ka pahaad
kahin parwaton ke saaye me sooraj ki parchhayiyun ka bhaav



kahin suhani hari hari dharti se saja har taraf nazara hai
har  tilti har panchhi ki zindadili jaise kudrat ki bahara hai




kudrat ek shayri hai jise Khuda roz likhta hai
kudrat ek aashiqui hai jisme Khudaai ka ehsaas palta hai

saveron ki chhuvan saveron ki taazgi mano har oor hui ikhlaaq ki barsaat si


mithaas iski mahsoos karen to madhoshi se roshni bhi sharma jaye
ye ek sada hai jo khumari se uthti hai khwaab me khoti hai

dharti gagan hawa pawan ye sab prakrati ke phool hain
inke ehsaas hi gulon ki khushbu aur gulshan ka usool hain







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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2010, 12:20:24 AM »
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bohot khoob likha hai aap ne kaash ji very nice icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2010, 04:08:11 AM »
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 :icon_salut:Wow Kaash ji bahut bahut khoob mindblowing creation,lovely scenes,bahut pasand aayee mujhe.excellent.great work. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause hello tongue3
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2010, 05:00:29 AM »
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nice and excellent creation...kip it up Kaash
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2010, 07:51:59 AM »
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Bahut achhi creation hai kash ji. Khuda ko koi dekh to nahi sakta lekin uski qudrat par ghaur karein to uske hone ka yaqeen hota hai.

No doubt your poem is very nice.
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2010, 01:13:35 PM »
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Nice Kash JI
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