~Mann karta hai...~

by vitasta on May 22, 2009, 03:14:49 AM

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vitasta

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badlon ke beech se jo
ek katra roshni khud ko chhipati nikal aati hai
uske aanchal mein khelne ka mann karta hai

saundhi saundhi si ik
mehak pehli baarish ke baad, jaise ghhul jaati hai
fiza mein, mujhko bhi kho jane ka mann karta hai

khilti kali kholti hai jab
parat-dar-parat khud ko, saare jahaan ko bhati hai
duniya ke samne 'Viti' ko aane ka mann karta hai

chamakti shabnam ho
pankhudiyon par phoolon ki, 'Noor' sa ik laati hai
choom kar uski mithas pi jane ka mann karta hai


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pandit

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2009, 05:58:36 AM »

Quote from: vitasta on May 22, 2009, 03:14:49 AM

bahut khoob jee...
waah...


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_Vicky_

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2009, 07:07:25 AM »

Aaye Hayeeeeee......... Kya baat hai VITI.. Bahut Khoooooooooooob.. Applause

Aur Khaas Kar Kudrat Ki Khubsoorati ko Kis tarah Apne Mehboob ke Naam se Joda Hai aapne.. wo Waqai Kaabil-e-Taareef Hai... Really Great Work....... Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**


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vikas2210

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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2009, 08:09:37 AM »

woow bahut kboob. kitna mitha aur sunder likha hai..... baur khoob


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vitasta

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2009, 10:09:34 AM »

Quote from: pandit on May 22, 2009, 05:58:36 AM

bahut khoob jee...
waah...

shukriya pandit ji Usual Smile


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vitasta

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2009, 10:10:35 AM »

Quote from: Mann on May 22, 2009, 07:07:25 AM

Aaye Hayeeeeee......... Kya baat hai VITI.. Bahut Khoooooooooooob.. Applause

Aur Khaas Kar Kudrat Ki Khubsoorati ko Kis tarah Apne Mehboob ke Naam se Joda Hai aapne.. wo Waqai Kaabil-e-Taareef Hai... Really Great Work....... Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**

bahut bahut shukriya mann ji! Usual Smile


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vitasta

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2009, 10:11:21 AM »

Quote from: vikas2210 on May 22, 2009, 08:09:37 AM

woow bahut kboob. kitna mitha aur sunder likha hai..... baur khoob

shukriya vikas ji! Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2009, 04:20:12 PM »

Beautiful Written Viti...Very NICe!


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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2009, 05:21:33 PM »

wah VITI Ji , wah, bahut hi khoob
accha laga bahut aap ki yeh poem padd key warna aksar humney sirf pyar , mohabbat, judai, gum key hi poems padi hai ... bahut khoob.... likhtey rahiyeh... very nice

jasbir singh


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vitasta

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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2009, 05:25:45 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 22, 2009, 04:20:12 PM

Beautiful Written Viti...Very NICe!

Thanks a lot Sophi Usual Smile


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vitasta

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2009, 05:27:54 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on May 22, 2009, 05:21:33 PM

main bore ho jaati hun pyaar, mohabbat, judai, aur gham ke baare mein likhte hue to kuch naya karne ka mann karta hai Usual Smile

shukriya padhne aur tareef karne ke liye jasbir ji Usual Smile


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jasbirsingh

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Re: ~~~Mann karta hai...~~~

«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2009, 05:29:30 PM »

Welcome Ji
arey jab bore meh itni badiya poem likhtey ho toh kabhi kabhi bore ho jaya karo and aisey hi new topics par, bore ho key likh dia karo .....