A hindu and a Muslim english- Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on December 15, 2011, 09:09:20 AM
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A hindu and a muslim meet in the dark near the tree
Searching for their loved ones, gone hours long now
The distrust and blame on their faces plain to see
Maybe he is the culprit says a voice, you shall soon see
The distant webs of hatred in their dark memories
Bred from their leaders their minds had long agreed

Hark! now the voices of their loved ones come to be
A sigh and a relief on their faces now clear to see
Gone was the hatred in their voices as you see
How they hid their guilt, in smiling faces and laughter

That night neither wanted their loved one’s to get
caught in their leaders web of hatred of yonder

They say its true that new religions are often born
In the darkness near the tree
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2011, 10:31:19 AM »
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Abul Asad saheb.The poem is a beautiful depiction of our mindset,often biased and poisoned by our so called leaders,which makes us doubt our brothers; but the minds ,being pure from inside, gain  sanity before any further damage while at the same time exposing true colours of the mischief mongers.Congrats for such a nice poem.Hasan
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2011, 10:36:44 AM »
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Hasan Bhai,

Thank you very much, your words mean a lot to me, they carry a lot of weight. You were probably among the few who could get the
Gist of this poem.

And very true, i am to spread love, wherever i go. to promote love
friendship, and understanding.

Again deeply indebted to you sire, for taking your time to make a comment here.

Prayfully your's
Abul Asad
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A hindu and a muslim meet in the dark near the tree
Searching for their loved ones, gone hours now
The distrust and blame on their faces plain to see
Maybe he is the culprit says a voice, you shall soon see
The distant webs of hatred in their dark memories
Bred from their leaders their minds had long agreed

Hark! now the voices of their loved ones come to be
A sigh and a relief on their faces now clear to see
Gone was the hatred in their voices as you see
How they hid their guilt, in smiling face and laughter
That night neither wanted their loved one’s to get
caught in their leaders web of hatred of yonder

They say its true that new religions are often born
In the darkness near the tree



This poetry come's From A Pure Heart & That is What Is So Special About It..

Asad Ji, A Great Poetry With a Right Mindset...

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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2011, 04:31:44 PM »
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Abul ji
what a nice creation showing the liveness of ur heart. Beautiful.

Jindgi jindadili ka naam hai
kya hindu, kya muslim- sabka khoon laal hai.
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2011, 04:40:03 PM »
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Khwaish and Mkv Sahiban,

Thank you very much, a pleasure as always to have people of your
calibre say a nice things about people like me.
I am indebted to you all, this was just something that came to my
heart and i thought i would give it a few words.

I am indeed humbled by your appreciation.

prayfully your's
Abul Asad
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2016, 11:32:19 AM »
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It's the leaders out there on the raofs and in the prayer halls that have created the religion of hate, hum to aise nahin thae
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