Baahar huun aaj ghar sey : maraaham talaashtaa!

by abdbundeli on November 07, 2009, 10:40:28 AM
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Guzrey hain din udaas, paas aa naheen sakaa!
Baahar huun aaj ghar sey : maraaham talaashtaa!
Tarsaa huun baar-baar, go ki, noor-e-yaar ko;
Baaqee naheen bachaa hai, koyee aur raastaa!!

Ab to, uyoon maangtey hain baarahaa ilaaj!
Pahunchaa huun isee waasitey dar par tabeeb key!
Uskee chhuree key roo-b-roo honaa hai kal yaa aaj;
Jalwey huye hain door gul-o-andaleeb key!!

Dosto!

Aankhoun key ilaaj key silsiley mein, eik-do maheeney 'monitor' key roo-b-roo naheen ho paauungaa! Aap sey 'door' rahney kaa gam to hogaa, par, yah ummeed bhee raheygee, ki, us key ba'ad aapkey pahloo mein kuchh aur ziyaadah waqt guzaarney kaa mouqaa bhee mileygaa!
Aap sab khush raheyn: aabaad raheyn!

       Shukraguzaar,
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2009, 10:44:39 AM »
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bahut khub ji
humari to yahi dua hai ki aap jaldi se aache ho jaaye
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2009, 10:49:39 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Abd Ji.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur Ham Dua Karenege Ki Aap Zaldi Se Theek Hokar Ham Sab Ke Beech Aa Jaye..

take care

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2009, 12:57:35 PM »
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Wah kya bat hai bahut hi sundar rachana hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2009, 03:35:20 PM »
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Quote from: baadal102 on November 07, 2009, 10:44:39 AM
bahut khub ji
humari to yahi dua hai ki aap jaldi se aache ho jaaye
Quote from: k.shael on November 07, 2009, 10:49:39 AM
Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Abd Ji.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur Ham Dua Karenege Ki Aap Zaldi Se Theek Hokar Ham Sab Ke Beech Aa Jaye..

take care

Shally.
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 07, 2009, 12:57:35 PM
Wah kya bat hai bahut hi sundar rachana hai Applause Applause
Baadal ji / Shally ji / Rishi ji!
Thanks a lot for all your kind words and wishes!
I'm due to be operated upon on Monday the 9th Nov. 2009; incidentally my Date of Birth also falls on the same day!
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2009, 03:37:44 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 07, 2009, 10:40:28 AM

Guzrey hain din udaas, paas aa naheen sakaa!
Baahar huun aaj ghar sey : maraaham talaashtaa!
Tarsaa huun baar-baar, go ki, noor-e-yaar ko;
Baaqee naheen bachaa hai, koyee aur raastaa!!

Ab to, uyoon maangtey hain baarahaa ilaaj!
Pahunchaa huun isee waaasitey dar par tabeeb key!
Uskee chhuree key roo-b-roo honaa hai kal yaa aaj;
Jalwey huye hain door gul-o-andleeb key!!

Dosto!

Aankhoun key ilaaj key silsiley mein, eik-do maheeney 'monitor' key roo-b-roo naheen ho paauungaa! Aap sey 'door' rahney kaa gam to hogaa, par, yah ummeed bhee raheygee, ki, us key ba'ad aapkey pahloo mein kuchh aur ziyaadah waqt guzaarney kaa mouqaa bhee mileygaa!
Aap sab khush raheyn: aabaad raheyn!

       Shukraguzaar,
                    - 'abd bundeli'


KYA BAAT HAI.....ABD JI..

BAHAR HO AAJ GHAR SE MARAAHAM TALASHTAA
HAM SAB KI DUA HAI,
JALDI PAAR KAR JAAOGEY YEH ILAAJ KA RAASTA.
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2009, 03:38:10 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha LIkha hai Abd Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2009, 03:44:59 PM »
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Quote from: cara on November 07, 2009, 03:37:44 PM
KYA BAAT HAI.....ABD JI..

BAHAR HO AAJ GHAR SE MARAAHAM TALASHTAA
HAM SAB KI DUA HAI,
JALDI PAAR KAR JAAOGEY YEH ILAAJ KA RAASTA.


Thanks a lot, Cara!
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2009, 03:47:01 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai ABD ji aapne hamesha ki tarah

Khuda se fariyaad hai aapki aankhe jaldi teek ho jaaye aur aap jaldi se yuhin mehfil sajaate rahe aur hame seekne ka aur mauka de...

God Bless U !
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2009, 03:59:37 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on November 07, 2009, 03:38:10 PM
Mashallah Bohat Achcha LIkha hai Abd Bhaiya,.

Thanks a lot Azeem bhai!

Uyoon-e-but sey baarhaa bahut ilaaj kiyaa!
Tabeeb ban key doston ney maraaham baantey!
Ye nayaa dour-e-zeest hai, ki, ittefaaq? 'Abd',
Kaam aayengey ab uyoon key chhuree-kaantey!!

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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2009, 04:01:59 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on November 07, 2009, 03:47:01 PM
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai ABD ji aapne hamesha ki tarah

Khuda se fariyaad hai aapki aankhe jaldi teek ho jaaye aur aap jaldi se yuhin mehfil sajaate rahe aur hame seekne ka aur mauka de...

God Bless U !

Thanks a lot for all your kind words and wishes, Sophi ji!
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2009, 07:20:30 PM »
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Guzrey hain din udaas, paas aa naheen sakaa!
Baahar huun aaj ghar sey : maraaham talaashtaa!
Tarsaa huun baar-baar, go ki, noor-e-yaar ko;
Baaqee naheen bachaa hai, koyee aur raastaa!!

Ab to, uyoon maangtey hain baarahaa ilaaj!
Pahunchaa huun isee waasitey dar par tabeeb key!
Uskee chhuree key roo-b-roo honaa hai kal yaa aaj;
Jalwey huye hain door gul-o-andaleeb key!!

hamari du'a hai ke aap jald theek hojae aur phir se mehfil main aap ki sabaq aamooz shayeri se hame kuch sikhne ka mauqa farhaam karein.. Allah hafiz
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«Reply #12 on: November 09, 2009, 02:11:39 PM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on November 08, 2009, 07:20:30 PM
Quote from: abdbundeli on November 07, 2009, 10:40:28 AM


Guzrey hain din udaas, paas aa naheen sakaa!
Baahar huun aaj ghar sey : maraaham talaashtaa!
Tarsaa huun baar-baar, go ki, noor-e-yaar ko;
Baaqee naheen bachaa hai, koyee aur raastaa!!

Ab to, uyoon maangtey hain baarahaa ilaaj!
Pahunchaa huun isee waasitey dar par tabeeb key!
Uskee chhuree key roo-b-roo honaa hai kal yaa aaj;
Jalwey huye hain door gul-o-andaleeb key!!

hamari du'a hai ke aap jald theek hojae aur phir se mehfil main aap ki sabaq aamooz shayeri se hame kuch sikhne ka mauqa farhaam karein.. Allah hafiz

Thanks a lot, nazar ghouri ji!
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«Reply #13 on: December 09, 2009, 03:48:00 AM »
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Guzrey hain din udaas, paas aa naheen sakaa!
Baahar huun aaj ghar sey : maraaham talaashtaa!
Tarsaa huun baar-baar, go ki, noor-e-yaar ko;
Baaqee naheen bachaa hai, koyee aur raastaa!!

Ab to, uyoon maangtey hain baarahaa ilaaj!
Pahunchaa huun isee waasitey dar par tabeeb key!
Uskee chhuree key roo-b-roo honaa hai kal yaa aaj;
Jalwey huye hain door gul-o-andaleeb key!!

Dosto!

Aankhoun key ilaaj key silsiley mein, eik-do maheeney 'monitor' key roo-b-roo naheen ho paauungaa! Aap sey 'door' rahney kaa gam to hogaa, par, yah ummeed bhee raheygee, ki, us key ba'ad aapkey pahloo mein kuchh aur ziyaadah waqt guzaarney kaa mouqaa bhee mileygaa!
Aap sab khush raheyn: aabaad raheyn!

       Shukraguzaar,
                    - 'abd bundeli'



Sitare jo chamakte hai...
Kisi ki chashm-e-hairan mein
Mulaqatain jo hoti hai..
Jamal-e-abr-o-baran mai..
Ye na-aabad waqton mai..
Dil-e-nashaad mai hongi..
Mohabbat ab nahi hogi..
Ye kuch din baad mai hogi..
Guzer jayenge jab ye din..

YE UNKI YAAD MAI HOGI..!!

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«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2009, 12:18:17 PM »
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Bahoot khoob likha abd jee Roja Jee.
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