Dear "Talat" , This Poetry is Dedicated To Your Loving Mother!!!!

by khwaish on January 29, 2010, 10:26:34 AM
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«Reply #30 on: February 03, 2010, 04:04:02 PM »
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Abd Ji,Aapne Tulsidas Ji ke Salok ka varnan bahut sahi Dang se Aapne Bataya..

Dhanyawaad, khwaish ji!

 Mout to eik din hareik ko leyney aayegee, par, yadi woh 'aatmaa' ko shareer sey aisey nikaal ley jaaye, ki, pataa hi na chaley, ki, 'PANCHHE' kab urh gayaa' to phir kyaa kahnaa!! Bhaley log aisey hi 'WAHAAN' key liye 'MAHAAPRASTHAAN' kartey hain!
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«Reply #31 on: February 03, 2010, 06:57:38 PM »
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Aapki Ammi ke bare sunkar dukh hua Talatji,
Duaa Karunga ki Khuda Aapki Ammi ko Jannat Aata Kare...

Is thread ko dekh kar aankhe bhar aayi,ekdusre pe liye logo apnapan aur aaisi understanding bahoot kam dekhne ko milti hai...
Hats off To All Creations.......
Mai bs itna kahna chahunga

Hamare liye najane kitne sapne sanjoti hai...
Hamari khushiyon me hasti hai, hamare gamon me roti hai...

Dekh kar tumhe yun rota huaa...
Ye mat bhulna use kitani taqleef hoti hai...

Na hona udas kabhi k use bhi gam hoga...
Maa ka dil bada najuk hota hai , Maa to bs aaisi hi hoti hai...
~Pank~
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«Reply #32 on: February 03, 2010, 07:26:05 PM »
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Khwaishji bahoot jajbaati aur dil se di hai aapne Talatji ki Ammee ko shradhanjali.....
Kaash hum bhi etna achha kuchh likh paate....
CELMIRAJI Shaantavnaa dene ko mere pass shabdh nahi hai....
Khuda aapki ammee ko jannat de.......aur aapko shakti...

Sab chahte hain saaya bado ka rahe jeevan bhar saath
Sab jaante hain maut ka aana haqikat hai,ek kadwa sach

Dair-savair jaana tou sabko es sansaar se hai
Himmat se chalte rehna he jeevan ka saar hai



Yeh Ghazal Main Khaas Taur Pe Mere Bahut Hi Ache Dost Talat Ke Liye Likh Raha Hoon,Jinhone kuch Hi Din Pehle Apni Ammi Ko Kho Diya..

Main Dil Se Yeh Ardaas Karta Hoon ke Unke Ammi Ko khuda Jannat Bakshe Aur Unhe Apne Reham-o-Karam ki Nazar Mein Rakhe..

Talat..Jaise Ki maine Aapko pehle Bhi Kahan Hai Ke Chalte Rehna Hi Zindagi Ka Doosra Naam Hai,Aur Hum insaan Isse Zyaada Aur Kuch Bhi Nahi kar Sakte..

Umeed Karta Hoon iss Ghazal Se Aapko Aage Chalte Rehna Ka Hausla Haasil Ho..

Shukriya..

Zindagi Hai Ek Veeran Safar
Iss Safar Mein Kuch palon Ko Dil Mein Sajaate Jaao...

Yeh Naa Socho ke Kya Khoya Hai Tumne,
Jo Hassil Hai Iss Safar Mein Usse Apnaate Jaao...

Awaaz Denge Tujhe Kal Dene Wale,
Aaj Apne Dil ko Apni Awaaz Banate Jaao...

Jis Maa Ko Aaj Tune Khoya Hai,
ussi maa ka Yeh sapna Raha Hoga Ke Tu Hardam Muskaati Rahe!!!!
Maa Ke Uss Sapne Ko Humesha Haqeeqat Banate Jaao...

Mehakte Hai Sirf Wahi Phool Jo Dhoop  Ko sehna Jaane!!!
Har mausam Mein Jo Jee Sake,Kuch Aise Phoolon Ko khilaate Jaao..

Manzil Par Pahunchna Hi Hai uss Musafir Ko,
Chaahe Laakh Raah Mein Deewar Uthate Jaao...

Eh dost Talat!!! "Khwaish" Yeh Dil Se Dua Deta Hai Tujhe!!!
Chaahe Zindagi Mein Kaise Bhi Halaat Ho ,Aap Bas Muskuraate Jaao....

                       ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~


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«Reply #33 on: February 04, 2010, 12:22:33 PM »
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Khwaish Dost, aapne is mushkil waqt main jis tarah mera saath diya hai, hausla badhaya hai, jis tarah mere ghum main shamil hue hain, mere paas lafz nahin.........Khuda aap jaisa dost har insaan ko de. Thanks so much Dost for being with me in this difficult time.
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«Reply #34 on: February 04, 2010, 12:28:33 PM »
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Mein 'sampoorna hrudaya' sey bitia Talat key is 'apaar maatru-shok' mein, unkey saath-saath 'shokaakul' huun!
Mein ney jab (1-6-1970) apnee poojya maataa ji ko khoyaa thaa tab hi jaan liyaa thaa, ki, jab maan naheen hotee hai to kaisaa lagtaa hai!
Isliye mein bitia Talat key 'shok' kee gahraayee ko samajh saktaa huun! Meyree maan tab sirf 54 saal keen hi theen! Unhee key naam sey, mein ney apnaa eik pen-name 'Ramwatiya' (yaanee Ramwati kaa)rakh liyaa thaa!
Yahaan, mein, apnee eik poem, jo aisee hi eik mout, jaisee ki Talat bitia ki maataa ji ko 'prapt' huyee hai, jo dardnaak honey key saath-saath lagbhag waisee hi thee, jaisee eik aur mout kaa 'warnan' Goswami Tulsidas ji ney kiyaa hai:

"Raam charan drudhh preeti kar,
 Baali keenh tanu tyaag!
 Suman-maal jyoun kanthh sey,
 Girat na jaaney naag!!"

Talat bitia ki maataa ji bhi Allah-paak kaa, Khudaa-paak kaa naam leytey-leytey binaa kisee dard yaa khouf key hi, seedhey jaa UNKEY pahloonasheen huyeen, ki, har koyi deykhtaa hi rah gayaa!  'Panchee urhaa, aur apney duniyaabee aashiyaaney sey, eik lamhey mein hi, apney haqeeqee aashiyaaney jaa pahunchaa!'

Poem yuun hai:

The Ball:
That played so long,
Was shivering,
On the table of pingpong;
This side of the net!

Came rainy winds!
Oh, tornado it was!!

- That got a flowery lift:
That was the cause!

- That's now:
That side of the net!!!

With my heart-felt condolences! May the bereaved family get HIS blessings & support endlessly, and HER soul may rest in ETERNAL PEACE in the vicinity of the ALMIGHTY ALLAH!


                     - abd bundeli


Dhanyawaad, khwaish ji!

 Mout to eik din hareik ko leyney aayegee, par, yadi woh 'aatmaa' ko shareer sey aisey nikaal ley jaaye, ki, pataa hi na chaley, ki, 'PANCHHE' kab urh gayaa' to phir kyaa kahnaa!! Bhaley log aisey hi 'WAHAAN' key liye 'MAHAAPRASTHAAN' kartey hain!
                            - abdbundeli


Babu Ji,

Aapne is waqt mere sar pe apna shafaqqat bhara haath rakha hai jis waqt maine apni zindagi ki ek besh-qeemti nemat ko khoya. Meri ammi bhi more or less usi age ki theen jis age main aap ki Maata Ji is duniya se gayi theen......Khuda ne bohot jaldi, kam umar main ye daulat apne paas waapis bula li........Is dukh ko yahi soch ke sambhaal rahi hoon ki wo jahan hon khush ho.

Thank you so much Babu ji for your support and love at this time.

Aap ki bitiya.
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«Reply #35 on: February 04, 2010, 12:31:57 PM »
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Thanks a lot Sophi, Vicky, Roja dear, Madhu Ji, Kaash Ji, Rishi Ji, Khamosh Ji, Sanjeev Ji, Panks and Koyal. Aap logon ne is mushkil waqt main mere saath diya aur hausla badhaya, I can't express my gratitude. Khuda ka shukr ada karti hoon ki usne ne aise dost mere zindagi main diye.
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«Reply #36 on: February 04, 2010, 02:39:42 PM »
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Khwaish Dost, aapne is mushkil waqt main jis tarah mera saath diya hai, hausla badhaya hai, jis tarah mere ghum main shamil hue hain, mere paas lafz nahin.........Khuda aap jaisa dost har insaan ko de. Thanks so much Dost for being with me in this difficult time.

Thanks Kis Baat Ka Talat!!! Dosti Lafz Sirf Khushiyan Baatne Liye nahi Hoti,Ek dusre ke gham,dukh ko baantna bhi To dosti hai..bas,Aapne sacha Dost kahan,Wahi Bahut hai..

Ab Plzz back to Routine life mein aao..Aur Humesha Jaise rehte ho waise hi raha karo..

Apna Khayal rakho...
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«Reply #37 on: February 05, 2010, 08:01:12 AM »
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Babu Ji,

Aapne is waqt mere sar pe apna shafaqqat bhara haath rakha hai jis waqt maine apni zindagi ki ek besh-qeemti nemat ko khoya. Meri ammi bhi more or less usi age ki theen jis age main aap ki Maata Ji is duniya se gayi theen......Khuda ne bohot jaldi, kam umar main ye daulat apne paas waapis bula li........Is dukh ko yahi soch ke sambhaal rahi hoon ki wo jahan hon khush ho.

Thank you so much Babu ji for your support and love at this time.

Aap ki bitiya.



Bitia Talat!

Sadaa sapariwaar khush raho!

Mein to apnee 'shubh-kaamnaaoun' key saath, har lamhey tumhaarey saath huun! Hamaaraa yah 'paawan' ristah, eik-do saal puraanaa nahin, katm-e-adam kaa hai!

'Niraalaa' ji kaa eik geet hai, jiskee eik laain yuun hai:
"Mukti huun mein, Mruyu ban aayee huyee na daro!"


The DEATH, though, appears to be a lot painful; but side-by-side it opens the 'VAST DOORS' of HIS MANSON to ENTER HIS ETERNAL ABODE to DWELL there ETERNALLY in total undisturbed peace, tranquility and eternal delight/ecstasy!

This is why, Lord Krishna says in GITA: "nainam shochitumarhasi" i.e. (this change of place/state of the SOUL) is not worth being bereaved for.
   
Hence, the death is not unwelcome; though an untimely death becomes too painful for the near & dear ones; but definitely not for the soul, that always remains intact, solely unaffected by these periodic changes, may be good or bad to any or all of us!!

I'm proud of you my baby, as you're a lot learned and enlightened, hence now bereave no more, but pray for HER peace and well-being over THERE if you so feel, otherwise in fact HER welfare is now guaranteed beyond all doubts!
May HE BLESS YOU!
WTBOMW
Tumhaaraa Apnaa,
R.P.GARg

 
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«Reply #38 on: February 10, 2010, 09:34:19 PM »
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Thanks Kis Baat Ka Talat!!! Dosti Lafz Sirf Khushiyan Baatne Liye nahi Hoti,Ek dusre ke gham,dukh ko baantna bhi To dosti hai..bas,Aapne sacha Dost kahan,Wahi Bahut hai..

Ab Plzz back to Routine life mein aao..Aur Humesha Jaise rehte ho waise hi raha karo..

Apna Khayal rakho...


Thanks again Khwaish Dost..I am trying.....Thanks so much for everything.
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«Reply #39 on: February 10, 2010, 09:58:34 PM »
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Bitia Talat!

Sadaa sapariwaar khush raho!

Mein to apnee 'shubh-kaamnaaoun' key saath, har lamhey tumhaarey saath huun! Hamaaraa yah 'paawan' ristah, eik-do saal puraanaa nahin, katm-e-adam kaa hai!

'Niraalaa' ji kaa eik geet hai, jiskee eik laain yuun hai:
"Mukti huun mein, Mruyu ban aayee huyee na daro!"


The DEATH, though, appears to be a lot painful; but side-by-side it opens the 'VAST DOORS' of HIS MANSON to ENTER HIS ETERNAL ABODE to DWELL there ETERNALLY in total undisturbed peace, tranquility and eternal delight/ecstasy!

This is why, Lord Krishna says in GITA: "nainam shochitumarhasi" i.e. (this change of place/state of the SOUL) is not worth being bereaved for.
    
Hence, the death is not unwelcome; though an untimely death becomes too painful for the near & dear ones; but definitely not for the soul, that always remains intact, solely unaffected by these periodic changes, may be good or bad to any or all of us!!

I'm proud of you my baby, as you're a lot learned and enlightened, hence now bereave no more, but pray for HER peace and well-being over THERE if you so feel, otherwise in fact HER welfare is now guaranteed beyond all doubts!
May HE BLESS YOU!
WTBOMW
Tumhaaraa Apnaa,
R.P.GARg

 

Babu Ji, Every word of yours is true. Your words have always enlightened me. Thank you for always keeping me in your fatherly blessings.

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«Reply #40 on: February 11, 2010, 05:10:11 AM »
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Babu Ji, Every word of yours is true. Your words have always enlightened me. Thank you for always keeping me in your fatherly blessings.


Dear Celmira!

We all belong to the one and the same root! Hence our togetherness is all well set & secure! I'm always with you & your loving ones!

May HE keep us all happy & strong-willed, so that we may continue to serve HIS CAUSE, as long as HE wants us to do that!

Lets worship life & live it thoroughly!

WTBOMW
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«Reply #41 on: February 11, 2010, 01:35:57 PM »
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Dear Celmira!

We all belong to the one and the same root! Hence our togetherness is all well set & secure! I'm always with you & your loving ones!

Thank You Babu Ji

May HE keep us all happy & strong-willed, so that we may continue to serve HIS CAUSE, as long as HE wants us to do that!

Lets worship life & live it thoroughly!

WTBOMW
abd bundeli                     - 

Ameen !
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«Reply #42 on: February 12, 2010, 08:10:06 AM »
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Thank You Babu Ji
Ameen !

Aameen!

   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #43 on: February 16, 2010, 04:29:02 PM »
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Khwaish Ji Aapne Bahut Hi Sunder Aur Dil Ko Chunne Wale Jajbat Likhe Hai Padhkar Aankhe Nam Ho Gai Aur Talat JI Mein Duaa Karunga ki Aapki Ammi Ko Jannat Naseeb Ho



Shukriya Rishji aapka jo aapne apna waqt diya..
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«Reply #44 on: October 25, 2010, 10:36:00 AM »
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BAHUT HI KHULOOS BHARA DEDICATION HAI KHWAISH SAHAB

Aapka Shukriya Khamoshji, jo aapne apna waqt diya
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