hamne suna hai...

by vineet thakkar on February 13, 2010, 10:02:50 AM
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jiski jitni chahat jisko
uska utna door hai chand
kal milenge fir khwabon se
aaj ki bas itni mulakat
hamne suna hai kuchh bando se
aise hi hote hain khwab
aankhon me ye kaid hain rehte
moond ke kar lo inke deedar
kuch ki umra to hoti pal bhar
our kuchh hote umra daraj
hamne suna hai kuch bando se
aise hi hote hain khwab
hamne bhi ye jaan liya hai
jin ummeedon ko naam diya hai
sabse pehle haste lab par
phir aankhon me katati raat
hamne suna hai kuchh bando se
aise hi hote hain khwab
 jab bhi mile hum neendon se
bas kehti itni si baat
kuchh kholen haum dil ko apne
kuchh tum kholo apne raaj
humne suna hai kuchh bando se
aise hi hote hain khwab
meri nani thee kehti kahani
jisme the wo raja rani
bhool gaye hum sab kuch lekin
fir bhee dhoondo pariyan aaj
haumne suna kuch bando se
aise hi hote hain khwab
pal pal the jo sang apne
kadmo ko vo chhod chalen hain
kal tak mere saye the
aaj hamara chhoda saath
hamne suna hai kuchh bando se
aise hi hote hai khwab
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2010, 10:44:57 AM »
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Bahut khoob Vineet ji.lovely creation.
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2010, 12:44:26 PM »
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Wah wah Thakkar sahab badi khoobsoorat poem likhi hai aapne. Dil ke jazbaat  lafzon me pesh karne mein puri tarah kamyaab hue ho.
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2010, 04:57:33 PM »
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Bhut Khub Vineet Ji And Welcome In Yoindia
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2010, 05:27:34 PM »
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Good work Veenitji
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2010, 08:32:40 PM »
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