Sooraj aur main..

by Pundreek on May 03, 2005, 03:23:17 PM
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Zindagi ke hosh sambhale,toh aapne aap se pucha,
ki yeh kya bala hai aur kyoun nahin aisa dooja?
Tab se hi aaj tak main sooraj se poochta huin,
ki aap hi  jug ko roshni kyoun dikhate hain,
aur phir kyoun aap kuch der chup jate hain?
Kyoun dharti par bhi aapka raaj hai?
Jab ki aap dharti ko chu bhi nahin paate hain!
Is par sooraj muskurakar bola,
Ki dharti hai shabnam aur main uska shola!
Hifazat tumhari main aise karta huin,
ki chand ko bhi wafai ka paigam main hi bharta hooin!
Kuch der hi sahi par yeh usool hai mera,
ki bechara chaand na reh jaye bilkul akela!
Chand ko bhi hak hai ki aapni chaandni woh dikhaye,
aur dharti ke aalam pe aapne daag woh chipaye!
Tabhi sooraj aur main tanhayee mein milte hain,
ki kabhi woh bhi bechara bhool jaye savera.....!!
Aadab...!
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2005, 03:45:34 PM »
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Zindagi ke hosh sambhale,toh aapne aap se pucha,
ki yeh kya bala hai aur kyoun nahin aisa dooja?
Tab se hi aaj tak main sooraj se poochta huin,
ki aap hi  jug ko roshni kyoun dikhate hain,
aur phir kyoun aap kuch der chup jate hain?
Kyoun dharti par bhi aapka raaj hai?
Jab ki aap dharti ko chu bhi nahin paate hain!
Is par sooraj muskurakar bola,
Ki dharti hai shabnam aur main uska shola!
Hifazat tumhari main aise karta huin,
ki chand ko bhi wafai ka paigam main hi bharta hooin!
Kuch der hi sahi par yeh usool hai mera,
ki bechara chaand na reh jaye bilkul akela!
Chand ko bhi hak hai ki aapni chaandni woh dikhaye,
aur dharti ke aalam pe aapne daag woh chipaye!
Tabhi sooraj aur main tanhayee mein milte hain,
ki kabhi woh bhi bechara bhool jaye savera.....!!
Aadab...!
wah pudreek ji,bohat acche,likhte rahiyega.
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2005, 05:07:51 PM »
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Shukriya nidhi ji...
Hum toh aapke saamne bus samundar ki ret hain..
aur aap samundar..!
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2005, 05:34:01 PM »
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Zindagi ke hosh sambhale,toh aapne aap se pucha,
ki yeh kya bala hai aur kyoun nahin aisa dooja?
Tab se hi aaj tak main sooraj se poochta huin,
ki aap hi  jug ko roshni kyoun dikhate hain,
aur phir kyoun aap kuch der chup jate hain?
Kyoun dharti par bhi aapka raaj hai?
Jab ki aap dharti ko chu bhi nahin paate hain!
Is par sooraj muskurakar bola,
Ki dharti hai shabnam aur main uska shola!
Hifazat tumhari main aise karta huin,
ki chand ko bhi wafai ka paigam main hi bharta hooin!
Kuch der hi sahi par yeh usool hai mera,
ki bechara chaand na reh jaye bilkul akela!
Chand ko bhi hak hai ki aapni chaandni woh dikhaye,
aur dharti ke aalam pe aapne daag woh chipaye!
Tabhi sooraj aur main tanhayee mein milte hain,
ki kabhi woh bhi bechara bhool jaye savera.....!!
Aadab...!


pundreek ji, its such a lovely poem!!! bohot hi koobsurat likha hai!! pls keep it up!!

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