Vishaal Vat Vriksh Ban Gayee Wo.......AnAAm

by ANAAM on February 11, 2011, 12:45:20 PM
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 occasion16 icon_rendeer icon_queen Vishaal Vat Vriksh Ban Gayee Wo.  icon_queen icon_rendeer occasion16

Pehle pehal wo ghulee-miliee
Apne nanhe-nanhe doston mai

Phir Bhai-Behan-Mata-Pita mai
Bant gayaa usska nirmal sneh

School jab gayee Saheliyon ne
Maang liya uss se unkaa hissaa

College mai kali jab phool hui
Kisi ek Vishesh  ko samarpit hui

Par  anjaane me maat-pita ne ussko
Byaah diya ek suyogay Rajkumar se

Phir se bantti wo piya k pyaar mai
Sasuraal k naye –naye rishton mai

Bantt-ti gayee wo har moud par
Milte gaye jo un sab doston mai

Puchha kisi ne kya sheese ki tarah
Toot-toot bikhar-bikhar gayee tum

Ussne kaha nahi jjdein majboot ho gayee
Aaj Vishaal Vat Vriksh ban gayee hu mein

Ab har daal-shaakh par phool khilte hain
Kuchh par lade meethe-meethe phal hain

Sach kahun battee par nahi tukde-tukde hui mein
Phal-phul kar aur Ghanee-Dhanee ho gayee mein



The Bargad ka Ped is also known as the Vat Vriksha.




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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2011, 01:08:46 PM »
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wah anaam ji.
poori kahani likh di aapne.
bahut khubsurat haqeeqat
daad hai ji
aur aaplo salaam hai ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2011, 02:28:45 PM »
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anaam.......... icon_flower
kya kahun iss kavita k baare me........  notworthy
yun laga meri apni kahani likh di tumne.... happy3
ek aurat k life ki bilkul sahi tasveer...... angel11
ek mastammmmmmmmm mast creation humnaam....... icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2011, 05:51:33 PM »
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aap to bht badi badi baate karte hai anaam ji...
bht khoobsurat kavita hia ji.....
aapki is kavita se ek judaav mehsoos hota hai.....
hats off for dis beautiful creation...
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2011, 06:19:20 AM »
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  occasion16 icon_rendeer icon_queen Vishaal Vat Vriksh Ban Gayee Wo.  icon_queen icon_rendeer occasion16

Pehle pehal wo ghulee-miliee
Apne nanhe-nanhe doston mai

Phir Bhai-Behan-Mata-Pita mai
Bant gayaa usska nirmal sneh

School jab gayee Saheliyon ne
Maang liya uss se unkaa hissaa

College mai kali jab phool hui
Kisi ek Vishesh  ko samarpit hui

Par  anjaane me maat-pita ne ussko
Byaah diya ek suyogay Rajkumar se

Phir se bantti wo piya k pyaar mai
Sasuraal k naye –naye rishton mai

Bantt-ti gayee wo har moud par
Milte gaye jo un sab doston mai

Puchha kisi ne kya sheese ki tarah
Toot-toot bikhar-bikhar gayee tum

Ussne kaha nahi jjdein majboot ho gayee
Aaj Vishaal Vat Vriksh ban gayee hu mein

Ab har daal-shaakh par phool khilte hain
Kuchh par lade meethe-meethe phal hain

Sach kahun battee par nahi tukde-tukde hui mein
Phal-phul kar aur Ghanee-Dhanee ho gayee mein



The Bargad ka Ped is also known as the Vat Vriksha.






Good One ... Anaam Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad !
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2011, 11:15:26 PM »
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Bahut Khub Anaam JI
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2011, 11:23:05 PM »
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bhai anaam ......aaj sach me aapne is kavita ko jis andaaz me likha jin bhawnaaon ke saath likha ..prashansa ke shabdon ka aakal pad gaya hai.....
aaj aapko bhai ka sambodhan dene ka dil hua.......bahoooooot khooob bhai....
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