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Author Topic: Ye Dua Hai Yunhi Muskurata Rahe...!!  (Read 862 times)
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« on: June 20, 2009, 07:15:57 PM »
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Ye ghazal maine pehle kisi ke thread main likhi thi......Is main kuch changes kar ke, ek naye ehsaas ke saath post kar rahi hoon..Ummeed hai aap dost pasand karenge..!!
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« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2009, 07:18:28 PM »
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Wah... Bahut bahut khoob Talat...

Really its so sweet and innocent. Clapping Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2009, 08:13:02 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2009, 07:15:57 PM
Ye ghazal maine pehle kisi ke thread main likhi thi......Is main kuch changes kar ke, ek naye ehsaas ke saath post kar rahi hoon..Ummeed hai aap dost pasand karenge..!!



Mashallah Talat ji
khoob likha hai aapne
agreed Angel di
its really sweet and innocent... Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2009, 10:12:54 PM »
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Waah behad acha likha hai aapne Talat ji,har sher bahot acha likha hai,an awesome ghazal
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« Reply #4 on: June 20, 2009, 10:39:53 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 20, 2009, 07:18:28 PM
Wah... Bahut bahut khoob Talat...

Really its so sweet and innocent. Clapping Smiley

Thank You so much Sweetie...God bless you.......
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« Reply #5 on: June 20, 2009, 10:47:53 PM »
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Bahut Meethe Meethe Lafz Likhe Hain Talat Ji.. !! Ehasaaas , Jazzbaaton Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai.. ek dost ke liye Bahad Masoom aur Behad Pyaari duaayen ki hain aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2009, 12:18:59 AM »
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Quote from: -Kashish- on June 20, 2009, 08:13:02 PM

Mashallah Talat ji
khoob likha hai aapne
agreed Angel di
its really sweet and innocent... Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Kashish...Thanks a lot Usual Smile
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« Reply #7 on: June 21, 2009, 01:44:01 AM »
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Waah behad acha likha hai aapne Talat ji,har sher bahot acha likha hai,an awesome ghazal

Bohot bohot shukriya Kaash Ji, aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya...Thanks so much.
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« Reply #8 on: June 21, 2009, 01:50:18 AM »
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Wah wah Celmira ji,beautiful gazal,very nice creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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« Reply #9 on: June 21, 2009, 01:59:47 AM »
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Celmira ji aap ke ash'ar ki tareef to sab ne ki or wo is qabil bhi he, magar yahan aap ki soch or us ki gehrai ne bohot mutassir kiya, jazbaat ka hona alag baat hai, magar use thik usi tarah alfaaz me dhalna bohot mushkil or maharat ka kaam hai...bohot shaandaar or jaandaar kalaam hai...Waah.
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« Reply #10 on: June 21, 2009, 09:50:02 AM »
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Sach mein bahut hee masoomiyat hai aapki is Ghazal mein, Celmira Ji!  Bahut pyaare alfaaz hain! Applause
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« Reply #11 on: June 21, 2009, 02:55:30 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on June 20, 2009, 10:47:53 PM
Bahut Meethe Meethe Lafz Likhe Hain Talat Ji.. !! Ehasaaas , Jazzbaaton Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai.. ek dost ke liye Bahad Masoom aur Behad Pyaari duaayen ki hain aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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Thanks so much Vicky bohot shukriya aapka aapne is koshish ko saraha aur itna pasand kiya...Thanks so much  icon_flower
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« Reply #12 on: June 21, 2009, 03:02:59 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Talat!!!

Itni Achi Dua Dene Wala shaks Aaj Ke daur mein Bahut Mushkil Se Milta Hai!!!!

Aapne Yeh Jo Nazm Likhi hai,Yeh Sirf Aapke Shayari ki Tareef nahi,Aapke Astitva Ki bhi Tareef hai..

Bahut Khushkismat Hoga Woh insaan Jiske Liye Aapne Yeh Nazm Likhi..Jo Aapka Itna Acha Dost Hoga.. icon_flower

Bahut Bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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« Reply #13 on: June 21, 2009, 03:04:07 PM »
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Bohat Achche Talat Sis,.
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« Reply #14 on: June 21, 2009, 09:03:04 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 21, 2009, 01:50:18 AM
Wah wah Celmira ji,beautiful gazal,very nice creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much Madhu
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