"Aman ki Asha"

by Neisha on January 22, 2010, 05:59:26 AM
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Raston ki lakir jo tune aur meine banayi,
Chupkar hum par hasti hain bahut,
Khinchi huin sarhad ka unhe pata nahi mayna,
Jude hain tar unke geharai me bahut,
Hawa jo bharli abhi abhi apni saanson me tune,
Meri sar zameen se mudi teri taraf,
Par khushboo uski kayam hai waise hi,
Wo khush hai ghumte hui ,befikr bahut,
Pani jo lekar aye badal ,baras gaye hatheli par,
Nahi rok paye unhe hum lakh koshish ke,
Wo garajte tujhpar bhi utna mujhpar bhi utna,
Rote hain teri meri bewakufi par,
Unhe to hum dono se hi ashnaa bahut,
Kabhi apne ansuon ki taraf hath badha kar dekh lena,
Bahenege ghum me ter bhi aur mere bhi,
har katra hai namkeentera bhi bahut mera bhi bahut,
Chhod de jane de,aur ghum badhan zindagi ka,
Hain kai aur bhi ghum jhelne ko abhi,
Pyaasa kyun koi khoon ka hai,mohtaj hai kisi ki jaan ka,
Lahoon ka rang lal tera bhi la mera bhi lal,
Siskiyon se chal hum khudko begair kare,
Jeena do din ka to hai, isme kyun bepak kare,
Kyunki zindagi choti si teri bhi bahut meri bhi bahut…….


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riyaz106
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2010, 06:48:19 AM »
Bahut achhi poem hai Neisha Ji. NIce creation, excellent.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2010, 12:13:45 PM »
Nice Creation
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2010, 05:38:43 AM »
Waah Waah Neisha ji.. Bahoot Umda likha hai.. Good work !
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malli
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2010, 02:32:31 AM »
Raston ki lakir jo tune aur meine banayi,
Chupkar hum par hasti hain bahut,
Khinchi huin sarhad ka unhe pata nahi mayna,
Jude hain tar unke geharai me bahut,
Hawa jo bharli abhi abhi apni saanson me tune,
Meri sar zameen se mudi teri taraf,
Par khushboo uski kayam hai waise hi,
Wo khush hai ghumte hui ,befikr bahut,
Pani jo lekar aye badal ,baras gaye hatheli par,
Nahi rok paye unhe hum lakh koshish ke,
Wo garajte tujhpar bhi utna mujhpar bhi utna,
Rote hain teri meri bewakufi par,
Unhe to hum dono se hi ashnaa bahut,
Kabhi apne ansuon ki taraf hath badha kar dekh lena,
Bahenege ghum me ter bhi aur mere bhi,
har katra hai namkeentera bhi bahut mera bhi bahut,
Chhod de jane de,aur ghum badhan zindagi ka,
Hain kai aur bhi ghum jhelne ko abhi,
Pyaasa kyun koi khoon ka hai,mohtaj hai kisi ki jaan ka,
Lahoon ka rang lal tera bhi la mera bhi lal,
Siskiyon se chal hum khudko begair kare,
Jeena do din ka to hai, isme kyun bepak kare,
Kyunki zindagi choti si teri bhi bahut meri bhi bahut…….

Ati sundar  Applause Applause Shabash Netra ji..... Good Very good creation  Thumbs UP
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