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Dhuan sa uth raha hai (Aaj ke halat)

by NETRAPAL on June 04, 2007, 12:50:35 PM

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dekho us taraf kuch dhooa sa dikh raha hai
halchal see mach rehi hai, kolahal sa sun raha hai

kahi ghar jal rahe hai kahi bas jal rahee hai
kahi log mar rahe hai, jnki chita jal rahee hai

sab shant ho gaya hai, sab kuch saham gaya hai
band padee hai dukane, bhooik se bache bhee ro rahe hai

wo dekho, rahnuma hamare kothiyo me so rahe hai hai
sarparstee me unke hee ye jhagde ho rahe hai

kyo lut rahee hai dukane, jal rahi hai insaniyat aaj
fir uthya hai sir aarakshan ne, wo hee danv has raha hai

Bhart ne bhee ye dekho aaj chand choo liya hai
par kahi maa ro rhai hai, koi bahan ro rahe hai

dekho us tarf kuch dhooana se dikh raha hai
ye kya jal raha hai, ye..................................

netra.....


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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2007, 01:39:20 PM »

Very True...
Bahut khoob likha hai Netra... =D>

Aise hi likhte rahiye... Usual Smile


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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2007, 04:47:57 PM »

Netra

Bilkul sahi kaha ! =D>

Good work :arrow: Keep Going !


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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2007, 06:53:27 PM »

Ya..

It is indeed a truely guided act of those politicians..
Apart of visible losses, there are many other losses like .. Farmers suffered a lot because transportation issues and other businessmen also suffered because of this. Will take many months to get things normal for many people.

And once again a nice approach by Netra.. ji


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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2007, 05:51:27 AM »

Netra ji sachayi ankho ke samne shayari ke roop me bahot khoob pesh kiya aap ne ...
aap ke kalam se aisa aur dekhne ka intezaar rahega...


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Dhuan sa uth raha hai (Aaj ke halat)

«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2007, 08:34:12 AM »

Bahoot Khoob Netra Bhai,..
Yunhi Likhte Raho,..


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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2007, 08:58:14 AM »

Watan Ki Ye Halat Hui Watan Ke Rehnumaan Se,..
Na Hui Ye Hindu Se Na Sikh Se Na Musalmaan Se.,.

__________________________________--Jaanasheen--


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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2007, 04:33:10 AM »

wah kay abaat hai Netra ji ,. bahoot hi acha likha hai

Nice lines Jaansheen


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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2007, 09:09:42 AM »

Shukriya Didi,..


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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2007, 11:08:35 AM »

thanks pooja ji and thanks jansheen ji

kyo jalta hai watan, lapto se kyo jhulaste hai tan
kyo gunjtee hai cheejk kaise sankat mai ayaa hai watan

jaltee chitaa kisi massom ki dekhi nahi jaatee
kyo ho rahe hai gumrah nojawan, bech rahe aaj we apna hee watan

ye kiasa alam hai, bhai hee bhai ka dushman hai
liye god me masom roti hai maye, ujada kaise hai aaj unka ye chaman

netra....