****Ek tukdaa Roti****

by jannatjahan on June 11, 2009, 08:29:55 AM
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jannatjahan
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Is jahan ki taqdeer
Aansuon se gili maati
aur ek Tukda Roti...

hai suru bhi yahi
aur ant bhi
anginat ho armaan
aur ichayen anant bhi
sapno ke chadar me yun hi
jeevan rupi raat kati...

is jahan ki taqdeer
aansuon se gili mati
aur ek tukda roti

asafal har banda
safalta ki raah me
din gujarta hansi thitholi me
aur raatein karaah me
fanse hue hai sabhi iski jaal me
is taqdeer ki bas yahi hai paripati

is jahan.............

bhagta ja raha insaan
par manjil kanhi koi nisaan
bebasi ne todi simayen
khamosi ne kholi jubaan
ek roti ki khatir hi to
insaan noch raha insaan ki boti....

is jahan .............

kothi pe kothi banwayee
aur mehlon pe sajaye mehlein
aadambar se bhara hai jeevan
jhapatata hai kyun Roti pe pehle
ye Roti hi to hai jisne
sabke labon pe khusiyaan baanti..

is jahan ki taqdeer
aansuon se gili mati
aur ek tukda Roti......
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2009, 08:32:56 AM »
Shweta,

Very beautiful creation ! Applause Applause Applause

Full of pain and emotions !
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2009, 08:40:45 AM »
Ohat Achche Shweta,.  Nice Work,.
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2009, 08:41:53 AM »
Bahut Dard liye Hue Hai aapki Yeh Poem Shweta Ji.. har Lafz me Succhaai Hai.. Alag Hatt ke aur Bahut Unchi soch ke sath Likha Hai aapka Yeh Kalaam... Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2009, 08:48:30 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on June 11, 2009, 08:32:56 AM
Shweta,

Very beautiful creation ! Applause Applause Applause

Full of pain and emotions !
Thanks Rajbir ji...aapne isme chupe dard ko feel kiya...mujhe lagta hai meri ye poetry ab puri huee.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2009, 09:49:12 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on June 11, 2009, 08:40:45 AM
Ohat Achche Shweta,.  Nice Work,.
Thanks Dear Azeem......
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2009, 09:54:51 AM »
Quote from: Mann on June 11, 2009, 08:41:53 AM
Bahut Dard liye Hue Hai aapki Yeh Poem Shweta Ji.. har Lafz me Succhaai Hai.. Alag Hatt ke aur Bahut Unchi soch ke sath Likha Hai aapka Yeh Kalaam... Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Bahut shukriyaa Mann ji....Aap kuch is tarah se hausala afzai karte hain ki dil khush ho jata hai....is kavita me chupe dard aur emotions ko samjha ye bahut badi baat hai mere liye....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2009, 11:40:03 AM »
Bohat khooob JJ
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 11:43:43 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Jannat ji,very sad. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2009, 08:57:42 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 11, 2009, 11:40:03 AM
Bohat khooob JJ
Thanks Ghayel ji ...apne kimati waqt me se kuch samay hari thread ko diya.......shukriya dil se Dost..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2009, 09:00:17 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 11, 2009, 11:43:43 AM
Bahut bahut khoob Jannat ji,very sad. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks Dear Madhu.....
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shab
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2009, 09:04:59 AM »
MASHA ALLAH SHWETA JI,AM NEW HERE hello2 Applause Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2009, 09:11:35 AM »
Quote from: shab on June 12, 2009, 09:04:59 AM
MASHA ALLAH SHWETA JI,AM NEW HERE hello2 Applause Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
Hey Thanks Shab Dear.....Welcome to Yo India ...Glad to see u here.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2009, 05:29:54 PM »
Wah Wah sweta sis bahoot bahoot Khoob!
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MHussain
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2009, 10:00:18 PM »
Appreciable work, nice to read.
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