Mein Dukhi hun, Mera bharat Gham mana raha hai

by Ricky on February 15, 2007, 11:25:47 PM
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Kyun aaj mein dukhi hun,

Mujhe gham kiska sata raha hai.

Uss mor par jo andhera chhaya hai,

Kyun mujhe woh daraa raha hai

Kyun unchayiyaan mere mulk ki,

Mujhe khokhli nazar ati hain,

Kyun wo jo dard hai

Gehra ander sama raha hai

Woh hai meri zami ka dil

Jo aaj dukh mana raha hai,

Noch rahe hai zamane wale,

Har ek apna jeevan sawar raha hai

Mere mulk ka kya hoga ae jan..

Mera bharat dukhi hai , dukh mana raha hai.
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2007, 02:12:45 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Ricky Bhai And Majid Bhai,..
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2007, 04:17:15 PM »
Ricky and Majid

Babut achche ! Keep it up =D>
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2007, 05:06:00 PM »
Thankyou Majid , Janasheen and Rajbir ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2007, 06:59:31 PM »
bahoot khoob Ricky and Majid!!!

Man mai santaap, ankhon mai pani hai
Hey Vidhata, kayun bharat ki aise kahani hai

Rishio ki dharati ka, ajj ke insaan ne kaya kar dala hai
Apne sawarth main dekhon, aam insaan ko jinda lash bana dala hai

Umeend bhari subah, naumeendi ki shaam mai dhal jaati hai
Nokari dhoondte dhoondte, amm insaan ki chapple ghees jaati hai

Ladki ka janam ajj bhi jahaan abhishaap mana jaata hai
Sar-e-amm vote ke badle vivah karwaana manga jaata hai

Bado ka samman ajj kahi go gaya, riti riwaz ajj ek tamasha ho gaya
Guruo ki pawan dharati per shikashak ka balatkaar ho gaya

Man mai santaap, ankhon mai pani hai
Hey Vidhata, kayun bharat ki aise kahani hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2007, 09:14:04 AM »
Nice One Again Didi,..
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2007, 11:55:42 AM »
Fantastic Ricky ji, majid & pooja ji.. Hats off to u all
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2007, 11:47:50 PM »
Quote from: "Ricky"
Kyun aaj mein dukhi hun,

Mujhe gham kiska sata raha hai.

Uss mor par jo andhera chhaya hai,

Kyun mujhe woh daraa raha hai

Kyun unchayiyaan mere mulk ki,

Mujhe khokhli nazar ati hain,

Kyun wo jo dard hai

Gehra ander sama raha hai

Woh hai meri zami ka dil

Jo aaj dukh mana raha hai,

Noch rahe hai zamane wale,

Har ek apna jeevan sawar raha hai

Mere mulk ka kya hoga ae jan..

Mera bharat dukhi hai , dukh mana raha hai.



aaaha... Today i got a chance to read your above
lines. Mr Ricky... i noticed that you really write... fantastic
dil se likhte hai... Esp... the following lines... bahut khoob likha hai.



Kyu Unchayiyaan mere mulk ki
Mujhe khokli nazar aati hai..
Kyu wo jo dard hai
Gehra andhera sama raha hai
Woh hai meri zami ka dil
Jo aaj dukh mana raha hai...

Love reading you more... keep up.
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2007, 10:16:28 AM »
Those are your nice words for me.
Accept heartly thanx from me !
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2007, 05:12:25 PM »
Desh main aaj bhi zinda hai
Mere khandan ka lahoo
Parwah nahi apne jaan ki
Jab tak main jeeti rahu
Congress ki bhalayee ke liye
Batakte rahungi main chahu
Indira ke jaise maru
Ya Rajeev jaise maru
Zamane ber ke tanon ko
Merte dham tak sahu
Phir bhi mat.tadawon se
Mai hath jodkar kahun
App Beti kaho ya Bahu
Mai to Bharateeya hu..!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2007, 07:40:03 PM »
You are writing on variety of subjects.. nice !
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