Mein tuje chor ke ja raha hu Maa

by Kanta on September 01, 2008, 06:04:02 PM
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This is my first thread here on Yoindia.com website.
I hope all the readers will enjoy my first work.
muje asha he ye kavita sab ku pasand aye gi.
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 06:11:10 PM »
 Applause good creation kanta
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 06:18:15 PM »
Very good creation Kanta Applause Hope to see more and more from you dear friend Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2008, 07:24:47 AM »
KANTA JEE AAPKO SHAYED ANDAZA NAHI AAPNE KYA LIKHA HAIN AAPNE EK BOHAT BADA SACH LIKHA HAIN I AM SURE YOU ARE WORKING IN MIDDLE EAST. AM I CORRECT QKE AAPNE JO LIKHA HAIN 110% DIL SE LIKHA HAIN.
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2008, 03:39:46 PM »
pasand aya na bekarar mahashay? koe mistake he kiya?
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2008, 03:45:37 PM »
hi celmira friend i just trying dear unlike you and roja i can't, glad to have you here.
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2008, 03:49:52 PM »
muje shriman sajid jesa ka khoj tha abi muje laga mera poem ko koe true heart se feel kia he. my struggle for this poem seems successful after your comment mr. sajid.
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2008, 03:55:34 PM »
Kanta

Kya baat hai ! Bahut khoob Applause

Bahut achi koshish ki hai tumne !

Funny shayari se nikal kar thoda serious bhi likha... acha laga Usual Smile

Keep going Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2008, 04:03:12 PM »
bahut hi aacha likha hai kanta ji
keep it up



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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2008, 04:01:48 PM »
han rajbir mein ne bahot dhyan lagaya jab jake itna difficult he poetry banana. your are very supportive rajbir i like it.
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2008, 04:03:54 PM »
yes baadal i know how hard to describe it here but you are a good supporter here on YO.
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2008, 07:47:31 AM »
Nice Sharing
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«Reply #12 on: September 30, 2008, 04:14:22 PM »
Quote from: Kanta on September 01, 2008, 06:04:02 PM


This is my first thread here on Yoindia.com website.
I hope all the readers will enjoy my first work.
muje asha he ye kavita sab ku pasand aye gi.

Bahut khoob Kanta dear.. Ab kabhi nahi kehna ke tujhe
likhna nahi aata. Tumse seekne ko mila mujhe. Good work dear
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2008, 10:26:12 PM »
sharing my thoughts on NRI's thru my own words, mastermind786

Roja behen kyu mein bhi tum  se sikhi han. tum se mil bakot shayri ka gyan mila thanks sis
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«Reply #14 on: October 11, 2008, 03:01:54 PM »
Nice One Kanta Ji,.
Bahoot Achcha Likha Hai,.
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