Chhod kar akela unhe, Hum bhi apni duniya basa na paye

by Ms. Jindal on July 20, 2013, 08:09:40 PM
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Kuch pal the jinhe hum bhula na paye,
Chaha kar bhi unki yaadyo ko dile se mita na paye,
Waqt ke sath hum dur to huye,
Magar waqt bhi un lamhe ko bhula na paye,
Khata Kiski thi ye pata hi na chala,
Par bus uske sath chalne ka vada hum nibha na paye,
Woh to jaa kar bhi wapas aa gaye unhi raho par,
Par hum chaha kar bhi wapas jaa na paye,
Lagta hai kabhi Kabhi mujhe bhi wapas jana chayie,
Magar us mod par hum wapas jaa na paye,
galat hi sahi, rasta bhi mera hi hai,
Jiska humsafar hum kisi ko bana na paye,
Shayad akele chalna ki aadat si  ho gyi thi,
Aur unhi aadato ke sahare hum kisi ko apna bana na paye,
Toda dil kisi ka to aj hum bhi usi mod par khade hai,
ki akela chhod kar unhe, hum bhi apni duniya basa na paye,
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2013, 08:10:07 PM »
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Kuch pal the jinhe hum bhula na paye,
Chaha kar bhi unki yaadyo ko dile se mita na paye,
Waqt ke sath hum dur to huye,
Magar waqt bhi un lamhe ko bhula na paye,
Khata Kiski thi ye pata hi na chala,
Par bus uske sath chalne ka vada hum nibha na paye,
Woh to jaa kar bhi wapas aa gaye unhi raho par,
Par hum chaha kar bhi wapas jaa na paye,
Lagta hai kabhi Kabhi mujhe bhi wapas jana chayie,
Magar us mod par hum wapas jaa na paye,
galat hi sahi, rasta bhi mera hi hai,
Jiska humsafar hum kisi ko bana na paye,
Shayad akele chalna ki aadat si  ho gyi thi,
Aur unhi aadato ke sahare hum kisi ko apna bana na paye,
Toda dil kisi ka to aj hum bhi usi mod par khade hai,
ki akela chhod kar unhe, hum bhi apni duniya basa na paye,
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2013, 09:55:01 PM »
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Bahot khoooob
Toda dil kisi ka to aj hum bhi usi mod par khade hai,
ki akela chhod kar unhe, hum bhi apni duniya basa na paye,
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2013, 11:18:40 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai. but agar yeh aapki poetry hai toh ise share section mein na post kijiyega..
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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2013, 11:44:37 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 21, 2013, 11:47:34 AM »
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nice lines
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2013, 09:31:46 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2013, 12:33:56 PM »
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Thnx 2 all.
Dear aqsh,
of course its my poetry but i m nt getting u. Plz explain me wht do u wnt 2 say?
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2013, 06:53:47 PM »
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very nice
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