ehsaas

by saahill on December 02, 2009, 07:15:47 AM
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humne kiya hai pyaar dilo jaan se unko
humne chaha hai sath umar bhar ka unse
hum samjha na paye zara si yeh baat 
humein iska nahin tha ek pal bhi ehsaas
ke din na rahega din na kategi tanhaai ki raat
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2009, 09:01:33 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2009, 05:54:28 AM »
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saahil sahi bolein to apki isse pehle ik rachna padhi uske saamne ye zara see fiki pad gayi,,,,
shaayad akele isse padhti to umdaa ki shreni me rakh deti ...pr is baar tulna karne k liye kuch tha...
wese nichod ye hai sab baaton ka ...aap accha likhte hein..pr kuch tathya dhyaan rakhen gar jasbaat wahi hein to shabdon ka fer badal kar le...yaa kuch alankaaaron ka prayog kar kavita me jaan bhar de...isse apki kalam aur tez hogi aur aap shresht se sarvashrest k shikhar par aasaani se pahoch paoge...


kuch kadam ki doori hai,
teri raah teri hamjoli hai,
bas har kadam aur mazbooti se bhadaaye jaa,
aatma vishwaas k sanket me khaak zami ki uddaaye jaa.
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2009, 06:10:38 AM »
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thx guhar ji i will try my best
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