Kaun Sunata Hai Aur Sunaye Kaun

by suman59 on December 12, 2012, 08:17:21 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1319 times)
suman59
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 102
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 7 hours and 56 minutes.
Your Breath Touched My Soul

Posts: 6539
Member Since: Jun 2012


View Profile
Reply with quote
Dard Apnata Hai Paraye Kaun,
Kaun Sunata Hai Aur Sunaye Kaun,

Kaun Dohraye Wo Purani Baat,
Gam Abhi Soya Hai Jagaye Kaun,

Wo Jo Apne Hai Kya Wo Apne Hai,
Kaun Dukh Jhele Aazmaye Kaun,

Ab Sukun Hai To Bhulane Mein Hai,
Lekin Us Shakhs Ko Bhulaye Kaun,

Aaj Phir Dil Hai Kuch Udaas Udaas,
Dekhiye Aaj Yaad Aaye Kaun...
Logged
prashad
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 23
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
3 days, 15 hours and 28 minutes.
Posts: 3615
Member Since: Nov 2012


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 08:30:07 AM »
Reply with quote
wah wah suman ji
Logged
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 3
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 1 hours and 25 minutes.

Posts: 3731
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 08:32:37 AM »
Reply with quote
very veryyyyyyyyyy close to my heart.......thanks for sharing
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
General Patrol
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 528
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
66 days, 6 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 9946
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2012, 09:28:55 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob ,suman ji
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 56 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2012, 10:39:27 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob
Logged
~Chiragh~
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 259
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
87 days, 14 hours and 59 minutes.
Sabkaa maalik ek !

Posts: 9764
Member Since: Jun 2011


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2012, 11:10:21 AM »
Reply with quote
very touching..
Logged
shara63
Maqbool Shayar
****

Rau: 22
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
7 days, 3 hours and 34 minutes.
Love of learning is the guide to life!

Posts: 561
Member Since: Nov 2012


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 11:14:03 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob kaha hai suman ji, mubaarak ho!
Logged
qalb
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 160
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
41 days, 21 hours and 16 minutes.
Posts: 7189
Member Since: Jun 2011


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2012, 11:31:51 AM »
Reply with quote
Dard Apnata Hai Paraye Kaun,
Kaun Sunata Hai Aur Sunaye Kaun,

Kaun Dohraye Wo Purani Baat,
Gam Abhi Soya Hai Jagaye Kaun,

Wo Jo Apne Hai Kya Wo Apne Hai,
Kaun Dukh Jhele Aazmaye Kaun,

Ab Sukun Hai To Bhulane Mein Hai,
Lekin Us Shakhs Ko Bhulaye Kaun,

Aaj Phir Dil Hai Kuch Udaas Udaas,
Dekhiye Aaj Yaad Aaye Kaun...



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Logged
Kaushal Sharma
Maqbool Shayar
****

Rau: 5
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
3 days, 18 hours and 42 minutes.
Posts: 849
Member Since: Sep 2012


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2012, 12:10:38 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah Wah Wah Wah Zabardast Creation Suman Ji .
Logged
sahal
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 109
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
46 days, 6 hours and 4 minutes.

love is in the Air,but CuPiD is alone here.

Posts: 4405
Member Since: Sep 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 03:29:59 PM »
Reply with quote
Dard Apnata Hai Paraye Kaun,
Kaun Sunata Hai Aur Sunaye Kaun,

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Kaun Dohraye Wo Purani Baat,
Gam Abhi Soya Hai Jagaye Kaun,

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Wo Jo Apne Hai Kya Wo Apne Hai,
Kaun Dukh Jhele Aazmaye Kaun,

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Ab Sukun Hai To Bhulane Mein Hai,
Lekin Us Shakhs Ko Bhulaye Kaun,

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Aaj Phir Dil Hai Kuch Udaas Udaas,
Dekhiye Aaj Yaad Aaye Kaun...


ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
suman ji lajawaab hai aap aur aapki ghalzal.
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
Logged
aqsh
Poetic Patrol
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 230
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
54 days, 3 hours and 29 minutes.

aqsh

Posts: 13034
Member Since: Sep 2012


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 04:27:56 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very nice suman jee
Logged
wasee
Guest
«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2012, 07:43:28 PM »
Reply with quote
No double it is funtastic ghazal. 2nd last sher is the best. Bravo for nice creation.
Logged
anmolarora
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 37
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
7 days, 15 hours and 38 minutes.

Posts: 5017
Member Since: Jul 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 07:54:18 PM »
Reply with quote
waah kya bat hai
Logged
Shaan Ansari
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 75
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
23 days, 15 hours and 17 minutes.

Posts: 2698
Member Since: Sep 2010


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2012, 09:01:01 PM »
Reply with quote
Zabardast, lajawaab
Logged
Riyaz Ashna
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
29 days, 13 hours and 38 minutes.

Posts: 2728
Member Since: Nov 2009


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: December 12, 2012, 10:01:10 PM »
Reply with quote
Suman ji aapki ye ek behtarin zabardast umdah lajawab munfarid mukammal murassa aur muassar ghazal hai. Bahot sari daad mubarakbad pesh karta hun.
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
June 19, 2019, 04:01:58 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[June 19, 2019, 01:10:35 PM]

[June 19, 2019, 01:09:48 PM]

[June 19, 2019, 11:02:43 AM]

[June 19, 2019, 06:57:51 AM]

[June 19, 2019, 06:37:48 AM]

[June 18, 2019, 10:46:31 PM]

[June 18, 2019, 11:22:22 AM]

[June 18, 2019, 07:06:11 AM]

[June 17, 2019, 08:22:31 PM]

[June 17, 2019, 08:14:50 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.186 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 48363 Real Poets and poetry admirer