phir ek raat ka anchal :)

by anjali kapoor on February 14, 2013, 11:48:39 AM
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this is my firzt poem

phir ek raat ka anchal lehrane aaya hai..
band ankho ne tere wajood ko paya hai..
hai khushi mere dil mai aaj itni..
laut ke koi aapna aya hai..

thami hai yaade kuch mulakato ki..
unn mulakato mai hui baato ki..
unn baato mai paye tere satho ki..
tere sang gujari raato ki..

chalega silsila ya rukk jayega..
kya mera dil..tere dil ka sath payega..
hosh mai ane ko ab jee chahta hai..
tujhe itni si baat samjha payega..

phir...aya hai
band...paya hai Usual Smile


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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2013, 12:05:38 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2013, 01:23:47 PM »
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bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2013, 05:54:56 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2013, 06:16:58 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2013, 10:02:17 PM »
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Anjali ji... bole to masssttt likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2013, 12:45:58 PM »
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bohut bohut bohut khoob likha hai anjali ji veru impresive poetry keep writing very good
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2013, 10:10:34 PM »
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Marvelous poetry! Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2013, 11:42:08 PM »
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Plz koye dark love part 4 likho plz kahane adhuri ha sirf ek part anjali ji na likha
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2013, 11:53:41 PM »
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asif ji na bahut ache kahane likhe ma un ke kahane ki fan hu nd Plz asif ji dark love part 4 ek naye suruwaatl likhya plz plz kahane adhuri ha sirf ek part anjali ji na likha tha plz asif ji isko pura karya
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